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Scarlett_Father

July 25, 2023

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Refrigerator issue

I bought a Simens double-door refrigerator one and a half years ago. Unfortunately, my wife found the plastic strip adhesive to the frozen room melted and the melted plastic sticking on the floors. In fact, I believe Simens so much, I haven't thought any issue will be caused on it. This new refrigerator, however, make me change my idea beginning from today.

I phoned the customer service department of Simens, the receiver answered and apologized for that first, then promise that a professional maintenance man would contact me in two hours. During the time we were waiting for the calling, I searched on the internet and found many customers complaining about the same issue as mine, they suggest us to change a new one if possible.

In theory, a new one is better than repairing it.

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A Refrigerator iIssue

I bought a Simens dDouble-dDoor refrigerator one and a half years ago.

This sentence is correct, but "one and a half years ago" sounds rather stiff; instead, I would say "a year and a half ago".

Unfortunately, my wife found theat the freezer's (?) plastic strip adhesive to the frozen room melted and the melted plastic sticking onstrip had melted and stuck to the floors.

I didn't really know what you meant by "frozen room"; so, I guessed based on context.

In fact, I believethought of Simens so muchhighly, I havedn't thought any issue will be caused on itconsidered that there would be an issue.

This new refrigerator, however, make me change my idea beginning from todayhas caused me to change my mind.

I phoned the customer service department of Simens, t. The receiver answered and first apologized for that first,, before then promiseing that a professional maintenance man would contact me in two hours.

During the time we were waiting for the calling, I searched on the internet and found many customers had complaininged about the same issue as mine, the, with many suggest using to change a new one if possible.

In theory, a new one is better than repairing ithe old one.

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Great job! Just a few corrections!

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Scarlett_Father

July 27, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! 😊

I bought a Simens (Siemens?) double-door refrigerator one -and a -a-half years ago.

Alternative: a year and a half ago.

Do you mean Siemens, the German manufacturer?

Unfortunately, my wife found than adhesive plastic strip adhesive to the frozen roomon the freezer melted and the melted plastic sticking on the floors.

I assume you mean the “freezer” section of the refrigerator.

I assume that “the floor” refers to the floor of your kitchen.

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Scarlett_Father

July 26, 2023

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Yes, it is "Siemens". I thought "Simens" was a bit weird, but couldn't find the reason. Thank you! :-)

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Scarlett_Father

July 27, 2023

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Unfortunately, my wife found than adhesive plastic strip adhesive to the frozen roomon the freezer melted and the melted plastic sticking on the floors.

yes, it is a "freezer" and "on the floor". Thanks!

Refrigerator issue

I bought a Simens double-door refrigerator one and a half years ago.

Unfortunately, my wife found the plastic strip adhesive tofor the frozen room melted and the melted plastic sticking on the floors.

In fact, I believetrusted Simens so much, I havedidn't thoughtink any issue will be caused onhad with it.

Or, "there would be any issue with it"

This new refrigerator, however, makde me change my ideaopinion, beginning from today.

I phoned the customer service department of Simens, the receiver answered and apologized for that first, then promise that a professional maintenance man would contact me in two hours.

During the time we were waiting for the calling, I searched on the internet and found many customers complaining about the same issue as mine, t. They suggest used to change our the fridge for a new one if possible.

In theory, a new one is better than repairing it.

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Scarlett_Father

July 26, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! :-)

Refrigerator issue


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A Refrigerator iIssue

I bought a Simens double-door refrigerator one and a half years ago.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I bought a Simens (Siemens?) double-door refrigerator one -and a -a-half years ago.

Alternative: a year and a half ago.

Do you mean Siemens, the German manufacturer?

I bought a Simens dDouble-dDoor refrigerator one and a half years ago.

This sentence is correct, but "one and a half years ago" sounds rather stiff; instead, I would say "a year and a half ago".

Unfortunately, my wife found the plastic strip adhesive to the frozen room melted and the melted plastic sticking on the floors.


Unfortunately, my wife found the plastic strip adhesive tofor the frozen room melted and the melted plastic sticking on the floors.

Unfortunately, my wife found than adhesive plastic strip adhesive to the frozen roomon the freezer melted and the melted plastic sticking on the floors.

I assume you mean the “freezer” section of the refrigerator. I assume that “the floor” refers to the floor of your kitchen.

Unfortunately, my wife found theat the freezer's (?) plastic strip adhesive to the frozen room melted and the melted plastic sticking onstrip had melted and stuck to the floors.

I didn't really know what you meant by "frozen room"; so, I guessed based on context.

In fact, I believe Simens so much, I haven't thought any issue will be caused on it.


In fact, I believetrusted Simens so much, I havedidn't thoughtink any issue will be caused onhad with it.

Or, "there would be any issue with it"

In fact, I believethought of Simens so muchhighly, I havedn't thought any issue will be caused on itconsidered that there would be an issue.

This new refrigerator, however, make me change my idea beginning from today.


This new refrigerator, however, makde me change my ideaopinion, beginning from today.

This new refrigerator, however, make me change my idea beginning from todayhas caused me to change my mind.

I phoned the customer service department of Simens, the receiver answered and apologized for that first, then promise that a professional maintenance man would contact me in two hours.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I phoned the customer service department of Simens, t. The receiver answered and first apologized for that first,, before then promiseing that a professional maintenance man would contact me in two hours.

During the time we were waiting for the calling, I searched on the internet and found many customers complaining about the same issue as mine, they suggest us to change a new one if possible.


During the time we were waiting for the calling, I searched on the internet and found many customers complaining about the same issue as mine, t. They suggest used to change our the fridge for a new one if possible.

During the time we were waiting for the calling, I searched on the internet and found many customers had complaininged about the same issue as mine, the, with many suggest using to change a new one if possible.

In theory, a new one is better than repairing it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In theory, a new one is better than repairing ithe old one.

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