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likeachild08

July 29, 2025

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Reflections

Hey guys.
Today I want share with you some reflections about world domination. In fact, over time always a little group of people found the way to stay on the climb of humanity.
Usually by direct violence, backed by powerful armies.
Later, these Tiranos began to use other ways of domination such religious doctrines or political doctrines or Military doctrines, all of them worked out in several moments of history.
But as the humanity was progressing, facts such as aducation and imformation bum. this domination become more and more difficult.
With the appear of computers, internet and satelital comunication, that resources of domination becomes obsolete.
How we'll dominate the humanity now? was the question that the rich elite did herself
Still we have something which we can use, what was it? the illnes and death afraid.
So suddenly appear the pandemic illnes. Now from the pharmacy and laboratories, they, the rich minority want to dominate the world again.


Reflexiones
Hola chicos
Hoy quiero compartir con ustedes algunas reflexiones sobre el dominio mundial. De hecho a lo largo del tiempo, siempre un pequeño grupo de personas encontro la manera de situarse en la cima de la humanidad.
Usualmente por la violencia directa respaldados por poderosos ejercitos.
luego estos tiranos empezaron a usar otras formas de dominio como las doctrinas religiosas politicas o militares, todas ellas funcionaron en algunos momentos de la historia.
Pero conforme la humanidad iba progresando factores como la educacion y el bum de la informacion, este dominio se volvio mas y mas dificil.
Con la aparicion de los computadores, el internet y la comunicacion satelital, esos recursos de dominio se volvieron obsoletos.
Como dominaremos la humanidad ahora? que la rica elite se hizo.
Aun tenemos algo que podemos usar, que era? el temor a la enfermedad y la muerte.
Entonces de repente aparecio la pandemia. Ahora desde las farmacias y los laboratorios, ellos, la minoria rica quiere dominar el mundo de nuevo.

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In fact, over time, always a little small group of people have always found the way to stay on the climb of humanity.

Later, these Tityranosts (?) began to use other waymethods of domination such as religious doctrines or, political doctrines or Military doctrines,; all of them worked out inat several moments of history.

Not quite sure what Tiranos means, guessing you mean tyrant?

But as the humanity was progressing, facts such as aeducation and imnformation bum(?).

Missing the end of this sentence, not quite sure what you meant to put there.

tThis domination becoame more and more difficult.

With the appearance of computers, internet and satellitale comunication, that resourceese methods of domination becoames obsolete.

"How we'ill we dominate the humanity now?"

was the question that the rich elite diasked herself

"
Still we have something which we can use, what was it?"

the illness and dfeath afraidr of death.

So suddenly appear the pandemic illnesappeared.

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likeachild08

July 30, 2025

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thank you very much

Reflections

Hey guys.

Today I want share with you some reflections about world domination.

In fact, over time alwaysthroughout time a little group of people always has found the way to stay onat the climbtop of humanity.

"over time" usually signifies a gradual change, while "throughout" signifies a consistent pattern

"always found" suggests that this pattern has changed

"en la cima" would be more like "at the summit" or something similar

Usually they do this by direct violence, backed by powerful armies.

This was a fragment,

Later, these Tityranots began to use other ways of domination, such religious doctrines or, political doctrines, or Mmilitary doctrines, and all of them worked out inat several moments ofin history.

lists of more than two items are separated by commas as above (I used the oxford comma, but I think UK English omits it)

"and" is necessary to connect the "all of them..." independent clause to the first part of the sentence

"worked" would sound to me like that they were used successfully by skilled people and could be used again

"worked out" would sound like they were used successfully by inept people and might not work again

But as the humanity was progressing,advanced factors such as aeducation and imthe information bumoom, this domination become more and more difficult.

some general nouns drop the "the" (example: el arte se vuelve a "art" y no "the art" usualmente)

if you mean by "iba progresando factores" that humanity was doing things to make progress in those areas, then something like:

1. humanity advanced factors such as education...
2. humanity made progress in education and...

would work

this domination become more and more difficult.

combined this with the previous sentence like in your original Spanish draft

With the appearance of computers, internet and satellitale communication, thate old resources of domination becoames obsolete.

appearance could work, so could "advent" or "introduction" or "development" or "creation"

"that resources" would have to say "those" resources, but this introduces a problem of ambiguity, since the most recent subject was new technologies and not the old forms of domination

"How we'ill we dominate the humanity now?"

in question form, the common structure "we will" can change to "will we"

was the question that the rich elite diasked thermself ¶
S
ves. ¶
Do we s
till we have something which we can use, what was it?

the iIllness and death afraidthe fear of death.

So suddenly appeared the pandemic illnes.

or more commonly

So the pandemic suddenly appeared. "pandemic illness" is redundant

Now fromthrough the pharmacyies and laboratories, they, the rich minority, want to dominate the world again.

Feedback

Interesting topic. Your writing was pretty easy to understand, just some grammar things and some minor clarifications were needed.

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likeachild08

July 30, 2025

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thank you so much.
your corrections are very usefull.
I hope do it better.

Reflections

Hey guys.

Today I want share with you some reflections about world domination.

In fact, over time always a little group of people found the way to stay on the climb, a group of people always finds a way to continue the domination of humanity.

Usually by direct violence, backed by powerful armies.

Later, these Tityranots began to use other waymethods of domination, such as religious doctrines or political doctrines, political, or Military doctrines, a. All of them worked out in several moments ofere successful at various moments throughout history.

But as the humanity wascontinued progressing, facts such as aeducation and imnformation bumoomed.

I'm not sure what you mean by "bum" but I tried to guess

tThis meant domination becoame more and more difficult.

With the appearance of computers, the internet, and satellitale communication, thate resources of domination have becomes obsolete.

How we'll dominate the humanity now?

wWas that the question that the rich elite diasked thermself ves?
Still
, we have something which we can use, w. What wais it?

tThe fear of illness and death afraid.

So suddenly appear, the pandemic illnesappeared.

Now, from the pharmacy andto the laboratories, they, the rich minority, want to dominate the world again.

likeachild08's avatar
likeachild08

July 30, 2025

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thanks a lot.

Reflections


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Hey guys.


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Today I want share with you some reflections about world domination.


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In fact, over time always a little group of people found the way to stay on the climb of humanity.


In fact, over time always a little group of people found the way to stay on the climb, a group of people always finds a way to continue the domination of humanity.

In fact, over time alwaysthroughout time a little group of people always has found the way to stay onat the climbtop of humanity.

"over time" usually signifies a gradual change, while "throughout" signifies a consistent pattern "always found" suggests that this pattern has changed "en la cima" would be more like "at the summit" or something similar

In fact, over time, always a little small group of people have always found the way to stay on the climb of humanity.

Usually by direct violence, backed by powerful armies.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Usually they do this by direct violence, backed by powerful armies.

This was a fragment,

Later, these Tiranos began to use other ways of domination such religious doctrines or political doctrines or Military doctrines, all of them worked out in several moments of history.


Later, these Tityranots began to use other waymethods of domination, such as religious doctrines or political doctrines, political, or Military doctrines, a. All of them worked out in several moments ofere successful at various moments throughout history.

Later, these Tityranots began to use other ways of domination, such religious doctrines or, political doctrines, or Mmilitary doctrines, and all of them worked out inat several moments ofin history.

lists of more than two items are separated by commas as above (I used the oxford comma, but I think UK English omits it) "and" is necessary to connect the "all of them..." independent clause to the first part of the sentence "worked" would sound to me like that they were used successfully by skilled people and could be used again "worked out" would sound like they were used successfully by inept people and might not work again

Later, these Tityranosts (?) began to use other waymethods of domination such as religious doctrines or, political doctrines or Military doctrines,; all of them worked out inat several moments of history.

Not quite sure what Tiranos means, guessing you mean tyrant?

But as the humanity was progressing, facts such as aducation and imformation bum.


But as the humanity wascontinued progressing, facts such as aeducation and imnformation bumoomed.

I'm not sure what you mean by "bum" but I tried to guess

But as the humanity was progressing,advanced factors such as aeducation and imthe information bumoom, this domination become more and more difficult.

some general nouns drop the "the" (example: el arte se vuelve a "art" y no "the art" usualmente) if you mean by "iba progresando factores" that humanity was doing things to make progress in those areas, then something like: 1. humanity advanced factors such as education... 2. humanity made progress in education and... would work

But as the humanity was progressing, facts such as aeducation and imnformation bum(?).

Missing the end of this sentence, not quite sure what you meant to put there.

Now from the pharmacy and laboratories, they, the rich minority want to dominate the world again.


Now, from the pharmacy andto the laboratories, they, the rich minority, want to dominate the world again.

Now fromthrough the pharmacyies and laboratories, they, the rich minority, want to dominate the world again.

this domination become more and more difficult.


tThis meant domination becoame more and more difficult.

this domination become more and more difficult.

combined this with the previous sentence like in your original Spanish draft

tThis domination becoame more and more difficult.

With the appear of computers, internet and satelital comunication, that resources of domination becomes obsolete.


With the appearance of computers, the internet, and satellitale communication, thate resources of domination have becomes obsolete.

With the appearance of computers, internet and satellitale communication, thate old resources of domination becoames obsolete.

appearance could work, so could "advent" or "introduction" or "development" or "creation" "that resources" would have to say "those" resources, but this introduces a problem of ambiguity, since the most recent subject was new technologies and not the old forms of domination

With the appearance of computers, internet and satellitale comunication, that resourceese methods of domination becoames obsolete.

How we'll dominate the humanity now?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"How we'ill we dominate the humanity now?"

in question form, the common structure "we will" can change to "will we"

"How we'ill we dominate the humanity now?"

was the question that the rich elite did herself Still we have something which we can use, what was it?


wWas that the question that the rich elite diasked thermself ves?
Still
, we have something which we can use, w. What wais it?

was the question that the rich elite diasked thermself ¶
S
ves. ¶
Do we s
till we have something which we can use, what was it?

was the question that the rich elite diasked herself

"
Still we have something which we can use, what was it?"

the illnes and death afraid.


tThe fear of illness and death afraid.

the iIllness and death afraidthe fear of death.

the illness and dfeath afraidr of death.

So suddenly appear the pandemic illnes.


So suddenly appear, the pandemic illnesappeared.

So suddenly appeared the pandemic illnes.

or more commonly So the pandemic suddenly appeared. "pandemic illness" is redundant

So suddenly appear the pandemic illnesappeared.

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