May 7, 2025
Reflection time.
The sun was starting to rise, and the colors of the sky start being more intensives. People walking calmy at the roads, enjoying the end of the afternoon. That's the perfect moment to reflect about the day and the opportunities he gives.
O sol estava começando a se pôr, e as cores do céu ficaram cada vez mais intensas. As pessoas caminhavam tranquilamente pelas ruas, aproveitando o fim de tarde. Era o momento perfeito para refletir sobre o dia e as oportunidades que ele trouxe.
OPTION A: Time for Reflection¶
OPTION B: A Moment's Reflection time.
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Poetic! Thanks for sharing.
The sun was starting to rise, and the colors of the sky start beinged to become more intensivese.
People were walking calmly at the roads, enjoying the end of the afternoon.
You started with "was starting to rise", which means you're talking in the past tense, so you should keep the past tense throughout the paragraph.
That' was the perfect moment to reflect about the day and the opportunities heit giaves.
"That's" is short for "that is", but since we're in the past tense, it needs to be "That was"
Reflection time.
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People were walking calmly aton the roads, enjoying the end of the afternoon.
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Great job!
Reflection time.
The sun was starting to rise, and the colors of the sky start beinged to become more intensivese.
"intensive" is an adjective for something like a course that is focused on a thing
People were walking calmly aton the roads/streets, enjoying the end of the afternoon.
"On the streets" is the term for like walking around an urban area with roads, "on the roads" implies (at least to me) being physically on the roads (and I assume you mean on the sidewalks)
That'It was the perfect moment to reflect abouton the day and the opportunities heit gives.
I changed "that" to "it" because "it" sounds more natural (sorry for not giving a better explanation)
Past tense for "it was/that was," since the rest of the text is told like a past event
All inanimate nouns use the pronoun "it"
The sun was starting to rise, and the colors of the sky start beinged to become more intensivese.
The whole sentence should be in past tense. You could also use 'intense' as a verb by saying 'the colors of the sky started to intensify.'
People are walking calmly aton the roads, enjoying the end of the afternoon.
That's the perfect moment to reflect abouton the day and the opportunities heit gives.
Nouns don't have a gender in English, so 'the day' would just use 'it.' You can use gendered pronouns to refer to abstract nouns like 'the day,' but that will sound very literary, like you are saying they are alive.
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Good job!
The sun was starting to rise, and the colours of the sky start becoming more intensivese .
‘Colours’ is the British spelling.
‘Colours’ is the American spelling.
You could also say ‘The sun was starting to rise, and the colours of the sky started becoming more intense.’ This keeps the sentence in the past tense as you’re talking about something that has already happened. But both work, it just depends on your preference of which one you want to use.
People walking calmly aton the roads, enjoying the end of the afternoon.
When talking about an object that you are standing on or moving on, the word ‘on’ is used.
Other examples of using the word ‘on’:
‘I went on the treadmill today.’
‘I was stood on the pavement.’
‘I was sitting on that chair.’
‘I was standing on a stool.’
That's the perfect moment to reflect about the day and the opportunities he gives.
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Overall a job well done! Keep up the good writing, reflecting on a day is nice to do!
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The sun was starting to rise, and the colors of the sky start being more intensives. The sun was starting to rise, and the colours of the sky start becoming more intens ‘Colours’ is the British spelling. ‘Colours’ is the American spelling. You could also say ‘The sun was starting to rise, and the colours of the sky started becoming more intense.’ This keeps the sentence in the past tense as you’re talking about something that has already happened. But both work, it just depends on your preference of which one you want to use. The sun was starting to rise, and the colors of the sky start The whole sentence should be in past tense. You could also use 'intense' as a verb by saying 'the colors of the sky started to intensify.' The sun was starting to rise, and the colors of the sky start "intensive" is an adjective for something like a course that is focused on a thing The sun was starting to rise, and the colors of the sky The sun was starting to rise, and the colors of the sky start The sun was starting to rise, and the colors of the sky started becoming more intensive |
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People walking calmy at the roads, enjoying the end of the afternoon. People walking calmly When talking about an object that you are standing on or moving on, the word ‘on’ is used. Other examples of using the word ‘on’: ‘I went on the treadmill today.’ ‘I was stood on the pavement.’ ‘I was sitting on that chair.’ ‘I was standing on a stool.’ People are walking calmly People were walking calmly "On the streets" is the term for like walking around an urban area with roads, "on the roads" implies (at least to me) being physically on the roads (and I assume you mean on the sidewalks) People were walking calmly People were walking calmly at the roads, enjoying the end of the afternoon. You started with "was starting to rise", which means you're talking in the past tense, so you should keep the past tense throughout the paragraph. People were walking calmly a |
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That's the perfect moment to reflect about the day and the opportunities he gives. This sentence has been marked as perfect! That's the perfect moment to reflect Nouns don't have a gender in English, so 'the day' would just use 'it.' You can use gendered pronouns to refer to abstract nouns like 'the day,' but that will sound very literary, like you are saying they are alive.
I changed "that" to "it" because "it" sounds more natural (sorry for not giving a better explanation) Past tense for "it was/that was," since the rest of the text is told like a past event All inanimate nouns use the pronoun "it"
That "That's" is short for "that is", but since we're in the past tense, it needs to be "That was" That's |
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