rRedesign ming My bBedroom

This sounds more natural in the US. We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

Since I have beenI moved into thean apartment over three month, there are still just few furnitures I bought and havs ago and still have only bought a few pieces of furniture.

I visited some of mya friend’s housme and their bedroom, they really have their own style.

Since I wasam lazy, it also gave me more opportunityideas to design my room.

My room is not small, so I wouldill divide it into three parts: the bed, the chill place and the workplace.

For the bed, I reused what I have now, and moved it near the window.

The mattress is heavy but I now couldI can handle it, thanks for the milk here haha.

I'm not sure what "Thanks for the milk here" means so I removed it.

Now I am laying into it, ton it. The only bad thing about it is that when the bed is near the window, all alert from the outside would come to your eyesyou notice everything outside.

lie, lay, has lain - takes no direct object

lay, laid, has laid - takes a direct oject

For the chill place, I am still considering which style I would love to use.

For the workplace, I found a really good example ofin my friend’s room.

He is a geek and has a fantastic wfh selections so tomorrow he will visit my home and figure out which is the best match for mine.

What is wfh?

And tomorrow he would visit my home and figure out which is the best match for my own.

redesigning my bedroom

Sounds a little smoother. 'redesign my bedroom' sounds like a command

redesigning my bedroom

Since I have been moved into the apartment over three month, there are still just few furnitures I bought and have.

I moved into my new apartment three months ago. The rooms look a bit empty, since there are still some items of furniture that I have to buy.

I visited some of my friend’s house and their bedroom, they really have their own style.

I visited some of my friends at their places (/houses). From seeing their bedrooms, you can really tell that they have their own style.

Since I was lazy, it also gave me more opportunity to design my room.

There is one advantage to my laziness these past three months, and that is that it gave me the opportunity to think properly about how I want to decorate my space.

My room is not small, so I would have to divide it into three parts: the bed, the chill place and the workplace.

The chill place is not actually proper English. It’s pure slang. Instead, you can say a place to relax

My room is not small, so I would have to divide the space into three parts: a place for sleeping, a place for relaxing, and a place for working. My bed will obviously go into the area allocated to sleeping etc.

For the bed, I reused what I have now, and move it near the window.

I didn’t buy a new bed. I kept the one I already had. I moved it near the window.

The mattress is heavy but I now could handle it, thanks for the milk here haha.

The mattress was heavy but I could handle lifting and moving it, thanks to all the milk I’ve been drinking here (ha ha).

Now that I am laying inton it, the only bad thing about it is that whenbecause the bed is near the window, all alert from the outside would come to your eyes.

all alert from the outside would come to your eyes - doesn’t make sense

Suggestion:
Light streams into your eyes once the sun is up, and if I forget to shut the window, then I get woken up by the noise from outside too.

For the chill place, I am still considering which style I would love to use.

I think you live in a studio apartment.

For the sitting area/ the hangout area, I am still considering which style I would love to/ want to use

For the workplace, I found a really good example ofin my friend’s room.

You can also use work station instead of workplace
Desk area can work too

He is a geek and has a fantastic wfh selections.

And tomorrow he wouldill visit my home and, to help me figure out which is the best match for my own.