Jan. 9, 2025
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I'm very excited now, but thereno have reason for it. So I need to write the article to relieve my excite. I will feltl very anxious when I was writing English article, because I'm not sure how many grammar I make mistakes.
I bought a white dish today, although it's made of plastic, but it's look nice. Finally, I decided to pay for it.
我现在很兴奋，但是没有任何原因。所以我需要写文章缓解一下我的兴奋，我在写英语作文的时候就会很焦虑。因为不确定我的英语语法又有多少的错误。
我今天买到了一个白色的碟子，虽然是塑料的，但是它好看，最后我选择付款了。
I'm very excited now, but thereno have is no reason for it.
You can use "I have no reason for it" or "there is no reason for it", it sounds like you tried to go for both.
So I need to write (theis/an) article to relieve my excitement.
You can use "this article" or "an article" here, "this article" focuses more on the fact that it's the current article, while "an article" focuses less on that.
I will feltl very anxious when I was writing an English article, because I'm not sure how many grammar I make mistakes I make.
"will" is for the future, but your feeling was in the past, so you shouldn't use "will" here.
I bought a white dish today, although i. It's made of plastic, but it's looknice-looking (Alternatively: "but it looks nice.")
"Although" and "but" aren't both needed, you should use one or the other, not both.
"It's" is a contraction for "it is". After that you need something that pairs with "is". "nice-looking" is an adjective equivalent here (this isn't a universal pattern, nice-looking is just one of the adjectives like that). Alternatively, you can replace "it's" with "it" to get rid of the "is". "look/looks" conjugates differently depending on who uses it. You use "look" with "I", "you", "they" or a named group of people, but "looks" with "he", "she" or "it", or a named individual
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The present tense is a challenging one to explain for a native speaker. "looks", "looking", "look" are all present tense, but it's a distinction that we all learned to make as children, so we never learned the words to explain the formal rules for which you use where.
Jan. 10, 2025
Thank you very much! Your revisions have taught me a lot!
I'm very excited now, but thereno have is no actual reason for it.
I will feltel very anxious when I wasam writing English article, because I'm not sure how many grammar I make mistmistakes will I makes.
Jan. 9, 2025
thank you!
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The title is grammatically correct, but it kinda sounds like a command so I changed it
I'm very excited now, but therenoalthough I have no reason for itto be.
So I need to write thean article/journal entry to relieve my excitement.
I will feltel very anxious when I was writingrite an English article/entry, because I'm not sure how many grammar I make mistmistakes I'll makes.
I bought a white dish today and, although it's made of plastic, but it'sit looks nice.
Finally, II still decided to pay for it.
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加油！You are improving everyday :)
Jan. 9, 2025
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I will feltl very anxious when I was writing English article, because I'm not sure how many grammar I make mistakes. I will fe I will fe I "will" is for the future, but your feeling was in the past, so you shouldn't use "will" here. |
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I bought a white dish today, although it's made of plastic, but it's look nice. I bought a white dish today and, although it's made of plastic, I bought a white dish today "Although" and "but" aren't both needed, you should use one or the other, not both. "It's" is a contraction for "it is". After that you need something that pairs with "is". "nice-looking" is an adjective equivalent here (this isn't a universal pattern, nice-looking is just one of the adjectives like that). Alternatively, you can replace "it's" with "it" to get rid of the "is". "look/looks" conjugates differently depending on who uses it. You use "look" with "I", "you", "they" or a named group of people, but "looks" with "he", "she" or "it", or a named individual |
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Finally, I decided to pay for it.
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Record the Moment Record The title is grammatically correct, but it kinda sounds like a command so I changed it |
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I'm very excited now, but thereno have reason for it. I'm very excited now, I'm very excited now, but there I'm very excited now, but there You can use "I have no reason for it" or "there is no reason for it", it sounds like you tried to go for both. |
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So I need to write the article to relieve my excite. So I need to write So I need to write (th You can use "this article" or "an article" here, "this article" focuses more on the fact that it's the current article, while "an article" focuses less on that. |
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