Sept. 30, 2020
Reasons why you should learn English
You can watch series and films in the original language.
Maybe you will get better jobs because if you speak english you will understand many people.
You can easily get in touch with people from all over the word and if you travel you can ask for directions.
English is the language of the internet. You can find anything if you search it in English.
You will understand the English songs and so you can enjoy it even more.
You can watch serietv shows and films in the original language.
Maybe you will getYou might be eligible for better jobs because if you can speak english, because you will be able to understand so many more people.
You will be able to understand the English songs and so you can, as a result, you will be able to enjoy ithem even more.
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Gute Arbeit! Du hast sehr wenig grammatikalische Fehler gemacht, und deswegen habe ich mich auf stilistische Verbesserungen fokussiert. :)
Maybe you will get better jobsYou might get more job opportunities, because if you speak eEnglish, you will understandbe able to communicate with many people.
You can easily get in touch with people from all over the word, and if you travel, you can ask for directions.
You can find anything if you search for it in English.
You will understand the English songs and so you can enjoy itenjoy the language even more.
"The English songs" means that you have some specific songs in mind. I think you are just talking about English songs in general, so I deleted "the."
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Good job! It might be helpful for you to learn some connectors like "also," "in addition," "besides." Here is a link that may be useful:
https://www.thoughtco.com/telling-stories-sequencing-your-ideas-1210770
Sept. 30, 2020
Thank you for your help!
You can watchwould be able to watch English speaking series and films in the original language.
You should use "would" to convey a possibility or a desire or an imaginary scenario. "Can", on the other hand, is really talking about a certainty or the ability to do something.
Maybe you willYou would be able to get a better jobs because if you speak english you will understandood by many people.
You can easily get in touchwould be able to easily communicate with people from all over the word, and if you travel you canled, you would would be able to ask for directions.
English is the language of the internet.
You can find anything if you search for it in English.
You willould be able to understand the English songs and so, which will allow you canto enjoy ithem even more.
Oct. 1, 2020
Thank you!
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You can watch series and films in the original language. You You should use "would" to convey a possibility or a desire or an imaginary scenario. "Can", on the other hand, is really talking about a certainty or the ability to do something. You can watch |
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Maybe you will get better jobs because if you speak english you will understand many people.
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You can easily get in touch with people from all over the word and if you travel you can ask for directions. You You can easily get in touch with people from all over the word, and if you travel, you can ask for directions. |
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English is the language of the internet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can find anything if you search it in English. You can find anything if you search for it in English. You can find anything if you search for it in English. |
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You will understand the English songs and so you can enjoy it even more. You w You will understand "The English songs" means that you have some specific songs in mind. I think you are just talking about English songs in general, so I deleted "the." You will be able to understand |
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