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Nov. 22, 2020

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reasons why graduates can’t find jobs and measures to fix it

Nowadays, finding jobs for graduates has become a harsh task. Some personal and social reasons are responsible for this, but there are still some solutions.
 
To begin with, one personal reason behind this trend results from the laziness of younger generations. With enormous advancements made in every walk of life, people in today’s world lead a higher and more cozy life than ever before, which causes them to stay in their comfort zones. China, for example, is a country where parents give their children too much attention, most of whom support their kids until they find jobs. As a result, youngsters may get used to this and rely too much on financial aid from their parents even without thinking about hunting jobs. Moreover, the keener competitions in today’s workplaces are supposed to be blamed. In the modern world, requirements for employees have been improved significantly, like qualifications and certifications they are asked for, which makes it difficult for the young to find a job.
 
However, there are some measures which can tackle this issue. First of all, academic institutions can set up some programs in curriculum to provide them with proper job hunting skills and resources from previous graduates, helping them prepare themselves better to enter into society. What is more, the local government should fund graduates who want to set up  their own business. For instance, the Geman government will support start-ups with money as well as provide them with preferential policies.
 
In conclusion, it is undeniable that finding jobs for people is hard because of their laziness and keen competition; however, there are still some ways out with setting job-related programs or funding entrepreneurs.

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reasons why graduates can’t find jobs and measures to fix it

Nowadays, finding jobs for graduates has become a harsh taskhas become a difficult task for graduates.

SomeA combination personal and social reasonfactors are responsible for this, but there are still some solutions.

To begin with, one personal reason behind this trend results fromis the laziness of younger generations.

With enormous advancements being made in every walk of lifeday, people in today’s world lead a higher and more cozy life than ever before, which causes themlives cozier than ever before, giving them a tendency to stay in their comfort zones.

China, for example, is a country where parents give their children too much attention, most of whom supporting their kids until they find jobs.

As a result, youngsters may get used to this and rely too much on financial aid from their parents even without even thinking about hunting for jobs.

Moreover, the keenergreater amounts of competitions in today’s workplaces are supposedalso to be blamed.

In the modern world, requirements for employees have been improvraised significantly, like qualifications and certifications they are asked forto have, which makes it difficult for the young to find a job.

However, there are some measures which canto tackle this issue.

First of all, academic institutions can set up some programs in their curriculum to provide themstudents with proper job hunting skills and resources from previous graduatesalumni, helping them better prepare themselves better to enter into society.

What is Furthermore, the local government should fund graduates who want to set up  their own businesses.

For instance, the German government will supportprovide start-ups with money as well as provide them withfinancial support as well as preferential policies.

In conclusion, it is undeniable that finding jobs for people is hard because of their laziness and keen competition; however, there are still some ways out with setlike creating job-related programs or funding entrepreneurs.

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Sidenote, I don't think people not wanting to hunt for jobs in the first place is a valid argument for why job-hunting is hard.

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Nov. 26, 2020

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Thank you so much for your reviews, it helps me a lot

reasons why graduates can’t find jobs and measures to fix it


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Nowadays, finding jobs for graduates has become a harsh task.


Nowadays, finding jobs for graduates has become a harsh taskhas become a difficult task for graduates.

Some personal and social reasons are responsible for this, but there are still some solutions.


SomeA combination personal and social reasonfactors are responsible for this, but there are still some solutions.

To begin with, one personal reason behind this trend results from the laziness of younger generations.


To begin with, one personal reason behind this trend results fromis the laziness of younger generations.

With enormous advancements made in every walk of life, people in today’s world lead a higher and more cozy life than ever before, which causes them to stay in their comfort zones.


With enormous advancements being made in every walk of lifeday, people in today’s world lead a higher and more cozy life than ever before, which causes themlives cozier than ever before, giving them a tendency to stay in their comfort zones.

China, for example, is a country where parents give their children too much attention, most of whom support their kids until they find jobs.


China, for example, is a country where parents give their children too much attention, most of whom supporting their kids until they find jobs.

As a result, youngsters may get used to this and rely too much on financial aid from their parents even without thinking about hunting jobs.


As a result, youngsters may get used to this and rely too much on financial aid from their parents even without even thinking about hunting for jobs.

Moreover, the keener competitions in today’s workplaces are supposed to be blamed.


Moreover, the keenergreater amounts of competitions in today’s workplaces are supposedalso to be blamed.

In the modern world, requirements for employees have been improved significantly, like qualifications and certifications they are asked for, which makes it difficult for the young to find a job.


In the modern world, requirements for employees have been improvraised significantly, like qualifications and certifications they are asked forto have, which makes it difficult for the young to find a job.

However, there are some measures which can tackle this issue.


However, there are some measures which canto tackle this issue.

First of all, academic institutions can set up some programs in curriculum to provide them with proper job hunting skills and resources from previous graduates, helping them prepare themselves better to enter into society.


First of all, academic institutions can set up some programs in their curriculum to provide themstudents with proper job hunting skills and resources from previous graduatesalumni, helping them better prepare themselves better to enter into society.

What is more, the local government should fund graduates who want to set up  their own business.


What is Furthermore, the local government should fund graduates who want to set up  their own businesses.

For instance, the Geman government will support start-ups with money as well as provide them with preferential policies.


For instance, the German government will supportprovide start-ups with money as well as provide them withfinancial support as well as preferential policies.

In conclusion, it is undeniable that finding jobs for people is hard because of their laziness and keen competition; however, there are still some ways out with setting job-related programs or funding entrepreneurs.


In conclusion, it is undeniable that finding jobs for people is hard because of their laziness and keen competition; however, there are still some ways out with setlike creating job-related programs or funding entrepreneurs.

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