Nov. 2, 2020
(Real experience) Open a bank account
What is “real experience”?
That means you want to do something.
First you will be preparing like watch some You Tube video or reading some books.
After you feel confidence than you will do it by yourself.
So, open a bank account is easy or hard in your country?
Some say easy, some say hard.
Recently I want to open a bank account.
I haven’t opened a bank account for more than 10 years.
So, I watched few videos from the bank and some Youtuber about open a bank account.
The process was easy but the staff was rude.
I guess no one will teach you to deal with a rude staff.
(Real experience) Opening a bank account
What is a “real experience”?
First, you will be preparing likeby watching some You Tube videos or reading some books.
Make sure your verbs match. watching and reading need to all match and be in the same tense.
Some implies plural, so you need videos (the plural of video).
You could have also said "First, you will prepare by watching some YouTube videos or reading some books."
After you feel confidencet thaen you will do it by yourself.
So, is opening a bank account is easy or hard in your country?
Some say easy, some say hard.
Recently, I wanted to open a bank account.
This should be the past tense.
I haven’t opened a bank account for more thanover 10 years.
More then isn't grammatically incorrect, I believe, but colloquially we just say "for over [amount of time]". This sounds more natural to me.
So, I watched a few videos from the bank and some Youtubers about opening a bank account.
The process was easy but the staff wasere rude.
Staff is plural, so we need to use were.
I guess no one will teach you how to deal with a rude staff.
Feedback
Great! Only a few issues with tenses. Sorry to hear that the bank staff was rude!
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(Real experience) Open a bank account (Real experience) Opening a bank account |
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What is “real experience”? What is a “real experience”? |
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That means you want to do something. |
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First you will be preparing like watch some You Tube video or reading some books. First, you will be preparing Make sure your verbs match. watching and reading need to all match and be in the same tense. Some implies plural, so you need videos (the plural of video). You could have also said "First, you will prepare by watching some YouTube videos or reading some books." |
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After you feel confidence than you will do it by yourself. After you feel confiden |
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So, open a bank account is easy or hard in your country? So, is opening a bank account |
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Some say easy, some say hard. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Recently I want to open a bank account. Recently, I wanted to open a bank account. This should be the past tense. |
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I haven’t opened a bank account for more than 10 years. I haven’t opened a bank account for More then isn't grammatically incorrect, I believe, but colloquially we just say "for over [amount of time]". This sounds more natural to me. |
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So, I watched few videos from the bank and some Youtuber about open a bank account. So, I watched a few videos from the bank and some Youtubers about opening a bank account. |
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The process was easy but the staff was rude. The process was easy but the staff w Staff is plural, so we need to use were. |
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I guess no one will teach you to deal with a rude staff. I guess no one will teach you how to deal with a rude staff. |
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