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"Days" is plural so use "these".

You capitalize important words in titles.

I think it is (just) a romantic lovinge story which could be ¶
happened only in dreams / which could only be happening in dreams.

I was thinking why such a daydream-like story would make that book worldwide famously.s. Sir Darcy is not only handsome, but also so rich that every mother wants him to marry her daughter,let alon. Not to mention he his good breeding.iwell bred. Is there any chance tof meeting such a guy in reality?

"Good breeding" isn't often used anymore.

Let alone - used to say that something is even less unlikely to happen than another thing. Ex: She wouldn't date him, let alone marry him.

Not to mention - When you are listing information, and you want to emphasize something that you're adding to the list.

I think it could ruin young ladies’ view point of love.t They may searching for a husband according this standard and get nothing at the end.how Such a pity to for (the) real men!

Thisese days I am reading a book named “proudPride and pPrejudice”.

I think it is just a romantic lovinge story which could be ¶
happened only in a dream.

I was [thinking about | wondering] why such a daydream of a story would make that book worldwide famously.s. Sir Darcy is not only handsome but also so rich that every mother wants him to marry her daughter,let alone to say nothing of his good breeding.i Is there any chance tof meeting such a guy in reality?

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I think it is just a romantic lovinge story which could be only¶
happened only in dream.

I was thinking why would such a daydream story would make that book worldwide famously.sir. Mr. Darcy is not only handsome but also so rich that, never mind his good breeding, so every mother wants him to marry her daughter,let alone his good breeding.i. Is there any chance tof meeting such a guy in reality?

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