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Reading is more educational than watching movies or TV.

Most will suggest that reading books are more beneficial than watching movies or TV; however, I, for one, disagree with this statement. I believe that the point is what kinds of books do you choose and some programs on TV or styles of movies are highly educational for every age of people.

To begin with, there are numerous kinds of book out there nowadays. Nevertheless, not all books are all worthy to read. For instance, some people enjoy reading books of fiction. There are full of imaginations but probably are not knowledgable than the programs, such as ''discovery''. This TV show demonstrates the details of nature, the process of the world and so on. It focuses on sciences and biology. I strongly agree that if watched this program, you might cut a bunch of time searching the information which you are interested in and studying about it. Because the TV has already provided enough details, pieces of knowledge and helped you to organize the whole process from beginning to end. Watching this can know more about the world or space and is better than reading something unreal.

What's more, if you picked the movies carefully, despite involves negative energy. It is possible to get some inspirations and add more life-enriching experiences. Morval movies, for example: most of the characters in the movies are positive features, bravery and have royalty. Fostering children is necessary to educate them on the perspective of compassion and morals. A better, successful person does not only have a high education but also has a nice character and knows how to expand their social network.

In conclusion, I definitely disagree that reading is more knowledgeable than watching movies or TV. This is because there are a bunch of educational programs on the channels and because some movies can also gain more inspirations for people to become a better person.

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Most will suggest that reading books areis more beneficial than watching movies or TV; however, I, for one, disagree with this statement.

I believe that the point is what kinds of books do you choose and some programs on TV or styles of movies are highly educational for every age of people.


This sentence is a little rough. I would write: I believe it matter what kind of books you choose.

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jaju

Nov. 18, 2019

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so much thanks!😀

Reading is more educational than watching movies or TV.

Most will suggest that reading books areis more beneficial than watching movies or TV; however, I, for one, disagree with this statement.

I believe that the point is what kinds of books do you choose, and some programs on TV or styles of movies are highly educational for every age of people. ¶
people of every age.¶

To begin with, there are numerousmany kinds of books out there nowadays.

Nevertheless, not all books are all worthy tof reading.

For instance, some people enjoy reading books of fiction books.

Or "some people enjoy reading fiction."

Therey are full of imaginations but probably are not as knowledgable than theas programs, such as ''dDiscovery''.

This TV show demonstrates the details of nature, the processes of the world, and so on.

It focuses on sciences and biology.

I strongly agree that if you watched this program, you might cut a bunchspend a lot of time searching for the information which you are interested in and studying about it.

Because the TV program has already provided enough details, and pieces of knowledge and has helped you to organize the whole process from beginning to end.

Watching this, you can know more about the world or space, and it's better than reading something unreal.


What's more, if you picked the movies carefully, despite it involvesing negative energy.,

I wasn't sure what the intended meaning was.

It is possible to get some inspirations and add more life-enriching experiences.

Moarval movies, for example: most of the characters in the movies arhave positive features, such as bravery and have royalnobility.

"Royalty" is usually used in the context of literal kings and queens.

FIn fostering children, it is necessary to educate them on the perspective of compassion and morals.

A better, successful person does not only have a high level of education, but also has a nice character and knows how to expand their social network.


This is because there are a bunchlot of educational programs on the channelsTV, and because some movies can also gainive more inspirations for people to become a better person.

Reading is more educational than watching movies or TV.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Most will suggest that reading books are more beneficial than watching movies or TV; however, I, for one, disagree with this statement.


Most will suggest that reading books areis more beneficial than watching movies or TV; however, I, for one, disagree with this statement.

Most will suggest that reading books areis more beneficial than watching movies or TV; however, I, for one, disagree with this statement.

I believe that the point is what kinds of books do you choose and some programs on TV or styles of movies are highly educational for every age of people.


I believe that the point is what kinds of books do you choose, and some programs on TV or styles of movies are highly educational for every age of people. ¶
people of every age.¶

I believe that the point is what kinds of books do you choose and some programs on TV or styles of movies are highly educational for every age of people.


This sentence is a little rough. I would write: I believe it matter what kind of books you choose.

To begin with, there are numerous kinds of book out there nowadays.


To begin with, there are numerousmany kinds of books out there nowadays.

Nevertheless, not all books are all worthy to read.


Nevertheless, not all books are all worthy tof reading.

For instance, some people enjoy reading books of fiction.


For instance, some people enjoy reading books of fiction books.

Or "some people enjoy reading fiction."

There are full of imaginations but probably are not knowledgable than the programs, such as ''discovery''.


Therey are full of imaginations but probably are not as knowledgable than theas programs, such as ''dDiscovery''.

This TV show demonstrates the details of nature, the process of the world and so on.


This TV show demonstrates the details of nature, the processes of the world, and so on.

It focuses on sciences and biology.


It focuses on sciences and biology.

I strongly agree that if watched this program, you might cut a bunch of time searching the information which you are interested in and studying about it.


I strongly agree that if you watched this program, you might cut a bunchspend a lot of time searching for the information which you are interested in and studying about it.

Because the TV has already provided enough details, pieces of knowledge and helped you to organize the whole process from beginning to end.


Because the TV program has already provided enough details, and pieces of knowledge and has helped you to organize the whole process from beginning to end.

Watching this can know more about the world or space and is better than reading something unreal.


Watching this, you can know more about the world or space, and it's better than reading something unreal.


What's more, if you picked the movies carefully, despite involves negative energy.


What's more, if you picked the movies carefully, despite it involvesing negative energy.,

I wasn't sure what the intended meaning was.

It is possible to get some inspirations and add more life-enriching experiences.


It is possible to get some inspirations and add more life-enriching experiences.

Morval movies, for example: most of the characters in the movies are positive features, bravery and have royalty.


Moarval movies, for example: most of the characters in the movies arhave positive features, such as bravery and have royalnobility.

"Royalty" is usually used in the context of literal kings and queens.

Fostering children is necessary to educate them on the perspective of compassion and morals.


FIn fostering children, it is necessary to educate them on the perspective of compassion and morals.

A better, successful person does not only have a high education but also has a nice character and knows how to expand their social network.


A better, successful person does not only have a high level of education, but also has a nice character and knows how to expand their social network.


In conclusion, I definitely disagree that reading is more knowledgeable than watching movies or TV.


This is because there are a bunch of educational programs on the channels and because some movies can also gain more inspirations for people to become a better person.


This is because there are a bunchlot of educational programs on the channelsTV, and because some movies can also gainive more inspirations for people to become a better person.

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