Have people lost their reading habits within the past ten years?

Alt: Have people lost interest in reading over the past ten years?

As far as I can remember, over one third of the passengers used to read books whileduring their commutes fifteen years ago.

Alt: For as long as I remember,

"As far as I remember" feels redundant when used with "fifteen years ago." Personally, I would only keep one or the other.

At that time, I was also obsessed with science books and put a lot of time into reading books.

"Also" makes sense only if you were also talking about science books in the previous sentence.
Deleted the second "books" because of repetitiveness.

HoweverLately, we find ourselves wasting our time by fiddling with smartphones lately.

A large number of bookstores has been disappeared dDue to the lack of demands and the emergence of online shopping, a large number of bookstores has disappeared.

Alt: Due to the lack of demand as well as the emergence of online shopping

Our physical bookstore experiences are now at stake now.

I found myself beingmore and more likely to choose practical books not based not on my preference, but on someone's review instead.

Online bookstores try to visualize how the book ismight be interesting or useful for our daily life.

While we learnt to avoid killing time by boring books and, we might loseend up losing authentic bookreading experiences instead.

Have people lost their reading habits withinover the past ten years?

As far as I remember, over one third of passengers used to read books whileduring their commutes fifteen years ago.

At that time, I was also obsessed with science books and had put a lot of time into reading books.

A large number of bookstores has been disappeared due to the lack of demands and the emergence of online shopping.

I foundbase my self being likely to choose practicalection of books not based on my preference, but on someone's review.someone else's review rather than my actual preferences

We learnt to avoid killing time bywith boring books and might loose authentic book experiences instead.

Have people lost their reading habits within habit of reading over the past ten years?

As far as I remember, over one third of passengers used to read books whileduring their commutes fifteen years ago.

At that time, I was also obsessed with science books and put a lot of time into reading booksthem.

However, in recent years, we find ourselves wasting our time fiddling with our smartphones lately.

A large number of bookstores has beenve disappeared due to the lack of demands and the emergence of online shopping.

Our physical bookstore experiences are now at stake now.

I fouind myself beingmore likely to choose practical books not based on my own preference, but rather on someone's review.

I'm not sure what you mean by "practical" here

Online bookstores visualize how the book is interesting or useful for our daily life.

I'm not sure what you mean by "visualize" here

We have learnt to avoid killing time bywith boring books and might, but we risk looseing authentic bookreading experiences insteadas a result.