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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 4, 2021

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Read Many Books

I have just finished reading my 200th book this year.

Actually, I didn't read many books.

By my count, I read less than 10 books per year.

Last year, I tried to read e-books instead of paper books.

I am able to read e-books anywhere and anytime when I bring my cell phone.

As a result, I could read more than 100 books last year.

During reading many books, I am able to understand this world more and more.

Moreover, I get an ability to summerize contents.

I will keep reading books, and recommend reading to others.

Corrections

Read Many Books

I have just finished reading my 200th book this year.

Actually, I didn't read many books.

By my count, I read less than 10 books per year.

Last year, I tried to read e-books instead of paper books.

When I bring my cell phone with me, I am able to read e-books anywhere and anytime when I bring my cell phone.

As a result, I couldwas able to read more than 100 books last year.

This sounds more natural.

DuringBecause I reading many books, I am able to understand this world more and more.

Moreover, I get anain the ability to summearize contents.

I will keep reading books, and recommend reading to others.

Only use commas before "and" if the clause after "and" is a complete sentence.

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Nice writing! Books are great for your mind. :)

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 5, 2021

402

Thanks for your corrections. I agree that books are great! :)

Read Many Books


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I have just finished reading my 200th book this year.


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Actually, I didn't read many books.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

By my count, I read less than 10 books per year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Last year, I tried to read e-books instead of paper books.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am able to read e-books anywhere and anytime when I bring my cell phone.


When I bring my cell phone with me, I am able to read e-books anywhere and anytime when I bring my cell phone.

As a result, I could read more than 100 books last year.


As a result, I couldwas able to read more than 100 books last year.

This sounds more natural.

During reading many books, I am able to understand this world more and more.


DuringBecause I reading many books, I am able to understand this world more and more.

Moreover, I get an ability to summerize contents.


Moreover, I get anain the ability to summearize contents.

I will keep reading books, and recommend reading to others.


I will keep reading books, and recommend reading to others.

Only use commas before "and" if the clause after "and" is a complete sentence.

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