The pProsperous Song Dynasty The Prosperous Song Dynasty

The pProsperous Song Dynasty The Prosperous Song Dynasty

In British English only short prepositions (about, for, with, to, from, etc.) don’t get capital letters in a title, unless they are the first or last word of the title

The pProsperous Song Dynasty The Prosperous Song Dynasty

China has a long history of five thousand years long history, which period of its ancient history do you like best? China has a five thousand year long history, which period of its ancient history do you like best?

China has a long history of five thousand years, w history. Which period of ancient history do you like best? China has a five thousand year history. Which period of ancient history do you like best?

This correction is based on British English, first part feels more natural said this way and making them in to two sentence makes it feel more conversational.

China has a long history of five thousand years, which period of ancient history do you like bestdynasty is your favourite? China has a long history of five thousand years, which dynasty is your favourite?

During the Song Dynasty, there was a relatively rare freedom of speech in aAncient China, giving rise to cultural giants such as the poet Su Shi. During the Song Dynasty, there was a relatively rare freedom of speech in Ancient China, giving rise to cultural giants such as the poet Su Shi.

During the Song Dynasty, there was a relatively rare degree of freedom of speech in ancient China, givingwhich gave rise to cultural giants such as the poet Su Shi. During the Song Dynasty, there was a relatively rare degree of freedom of speech in ancient China, which gave rise to cultural giants such as the poet Su Shi.

These changes make this more natural for British English. The way you wrote ancient China works here because only China is a proper noun, ancient is not considered a proper noun even when used to talk about a specific time in China. (Good job)

When Chinese people learn their native language, these great poemsy have to be mastered these great poems. When Chinese people learn their native language, they have to master these great poems.

I don't think yours is wrong, but I'd say it like this.

When Chinese people learn their native language, these great poems have to be mastered. When Chinese people learn their native language, these great poems have to be mastered.

The income brought by the export of porcelain iwas an important source of finance. The income brought by the export of porcelain was an important source of finance.

The income brought by the export of porcelain iwas an important source of finance. The income brought by the export of porcelain was an important source of finance.

Use was here instead of is. (You are referring to past actions and have used was in other sentence referring to this time.)

The income brought by the export of porcelain iwas an important source of finance. The income brought by the export of porcelain was an important source of finance.

Since the Song Dynasty, the curfew system hasd been officially and completely lifted, and night travel has been allowed. Since the Song Dynasty, the curfew system had been officially and completely lifted, and night travel has been allowed.

Since the Song Dynasty, the curfew system has been officially and completely lifted, and night travel has been allowed. Since the Song Dynasty, the curfew system has been officially and completely lifted, and night travel has been allowed.

I don’t know enough about China to correct anything here. Sentence makes perfect sense to me if this is still in effect .

This hasd given rise to a prosperous night economy, allowing the common people to enjoy 24-hour freedom. This had given rise to a prosperous night economy, allowing the common people to enjoy 24-hour freedom.

This has gigaven rise to a prosperous night economy, allowing the common people to enjoy 24-hour freedom. This gave rise to a prosperous night economy, allowing the common people to enjoy 24-hour freedom.

However, due to the fact that the central government valued scholars over military force, the Chinese people began to lose their kungfu from then on. However, due to the fact that the central government valued scholars over military force, the Chinese people began to lose their kungfu from then on.

Not sure if this should say kungfu skills or knowledge or if it is fine the way it is. (Hopefully someone else will know!) sentence still looks good to me though.

However, due to the fact that the central government valued scholars over the military force, the Chinese people began to lose their kungfu from then on. However, due to the fact that the central government valued scholars over the military , the Chinese people began to lose their kungfu from then on.

Due to its weak military power, the Song Dynasty was eventually conquered by the Mongolian Empire. Due to its weak military power, the Song Dynasty was eventually conquered by the Mongol Empire.

Sentence is perfect. I think in English we refer to it as the Mongol Empire. Happy to be corrected if i’m wrong on that thought.