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July 28, 2022

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re Talking about Food 11

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ



B: What did you have for breakfast?
A: I had leftover miso soup from last night's dinner, so I ate it with rice.
B: What did you put in it?
A: Just potatoes!
B: Nice and simple.
A: Yeah, most Japanese households only add one ingredient to their miso soup.
B: Oh, really? I didn't know that. What about lunch?
A: Didn't have any!
B: Again? You must like to skip lunch.
A: Yes, I love to do.
B: What was for dinner?
A: McDonald's nuggets. They discount that a 15-piece is on sale for 390 yen. I also had red leaf lettuce and bacon with miso and vinegar sauce.
B: Nice! What's the normal price for a 15-piece in Japan?
A: 580.
B: Not too different.
A: Oh, I see. Are you a nuggets or fries person?

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re Talking about Food 11

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to receiveing your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

or

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: What did you have for breakfast?

A: I had leftover miso soup from last night's dinner, so I ate it with rice.

B: What did you put in it?

A: Just potatoes!

B: Nice and simple.

A: Yeah, most Japanese households only add one ingredient to their miso soup.

B: Oh, really?

I didn't know that.

What about for lunch?

A: Didn't have any!

B: Again?

You must like to skip lunch.

A: Yesah, I love to do.

or

A: Yup, I do.

B: What was for dinner?

A: McDonald's chicken nuggets.

This is more often said in the US.

They discount that a 15-piece is on sale for 390 yen.

This is more often said in the US.

I also had red leaf lettuce and bacon with miso and vinegar sauce.

B: Nice!

What's the normal price for a 15-piece in Japan?

A: 580.

B: Not too different.

A: Oh, I see.

Are you a nuggets or fries person?

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sho

July 31, 2022

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A: Yes, I love todo skip lunch a lot / Yes, I do.

love is too strong. it sounds like you REALLY like to skip lunch, like it's your passion.

They have a discount that aright now, you can get 15- piece is on sales for 390 yen.

What's the normal price for a 15-piece15 nuggets in Japan?

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sho

July 29, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

re Talking about Food 11


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


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You can change whatever you want!


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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


I'm looking forward to receiveing your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

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B: What did you have for breakfast?


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A: I had leftover miso soup from last night's dinner, so I ate it with rice.


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B: What did you put in it?


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A: Just potatoes!


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B: Nice and simple.


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A: Yeah, most Japanese households only add one ingredient to their miso soup.


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B: Oh, really?


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I didn't know that.


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What about lunch?


What about for lunch?

A: Didn't have any!


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B: Again?


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You must like to skip lunch.


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A: Yes, I love to do.


A: Yes, I love todo skip lunch a lot / Yes, I do.

love is too strong. it sounds like you REALLY like to skip lunch, like it's your passion.

A: Yesah, I love to do.

or A: Yup, I do.

B: What was for dinner?


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A: McDonald's nuggets.


A: McDonald's chicken nuggets.

This is more often said in the US.

They discount that a 15-piece is on sale for 390 yen.


They have a discount that aright now, you can get 15- piece is on sales for 390 yen.

They discount that a 15-piece is on sale for 390 yen.

This is more often said in the US.

I also had red leaf lettuce and bacon with miso and vinegar sauce.


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B: Nice!


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What's the normal price for a 15-piece in Japan?


What's the normal price for a 15-piece15 nuggets in Japan?

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A: 580.


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B: Not too different.


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A: Oh, I see.


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Are you a nuggets or fries person?


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