July 29, 2022
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I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: What time did you get up today?
A: Around ten o'clock
B: late!
A: Cause I went to bed way too late.
B: What time?
A: Around 5:30 this morning.
B: Ohh, then you good job despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30a.m.
A: Right?
B: You're still sleepy, aren't you?
A: I'm wide awake.
re Talk 1
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
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I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receiveing your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: What time did you get up today?
A: Around ten o'clock.
B: That's late!
A: 'Cause I went to bed way too late.
B: What time?
A: Around 5:30 this morning.
B: Ohh, then you good jobdid well despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30a.m.
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: Right?
B: You're still sleepy, aren't you?
A: I'm wide awake.
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July 31, 2022
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A: Around ten o'clock
For a more natural sentence, I'd omit "o'clock" - it sounds more formal or professional.
B: That's late!
A: Cause I went to bed way too late.
A: Around 5:30 this morning.
In a casual sentence we probably wouldn't need to say "this morning" or "o'clock" as mentioned before.
B: Ohh, then you good job being awake despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30a.m.
July 30, 2022
Thank you so much!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
B: What time did you get up today?
Perfect!
B:That's late!¶
Or: Pretty late!
A: CYeah, cause I went to bed way too late.
Or: It's cause I went to bed way too late.
A: AroundLike 5:30 this morning. (less formal)
B: Ohh, then you good jobdon't look too bad despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30a.m.
Does this mean they don't look too tired?
If so:
Ohh, then you don't look too bad despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30. (don't need to say a.m.)
Or does it mean they managed 4.5 hours sleep, and that's good?
A: Nope, I'm wide awake.
July 30, 2022
B: Ohh, then you good jobdon't look too bad despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30a.m.
I told him he was late getting up, but he went to bed late and got up at 10:30, meaning he was early, which is great. What should I say๏ผ
July 30, 2022
B: Ohh, then you good jobdon't look too bad despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30a.m.
I told him he was late getting up, but he went to bed late and got up at 10a.m., meaning he was early, which is great. What should I say๏ผ
July 30, 2022
I told him he was late getting up, but he went to bed late and got up at 10a.m., meaning he was early, which is great. What should I say๏ผ
Ok, that makes sense.
In that case, "good job" could work!
E.g. Ohh, then good job, despite the fact you went to bed at 5:30.
("you good job" doesn't make sense, there is no verb)
July 31, 2022
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A: Around ten o'clock A: Around ten For a more natural sentence, I'd omit "o'clock" - it sounds more formal or professional. A: Around ten o'clock. |
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B: Ohh, so you good job despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30a.m. |
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B: Ohh, then you good job despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30a.m.
Does this mean they don't look too tired? If so: Ohh, then you don't look too bad despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30. (don't need to say a.m.) Or does it mean they managed 4.5 hours sleep, and that's good? B: Ohh, then B: Ohh, then you This sounds more natural in the US. |
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