July 16, 2022
re re A & B Talk76
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know how?
A: What's going on?
B: The ticket gate won't open.
A: I see. Did you use an Ic card?
B: Yes.
A: Maybe you need to recharge it. I think ticket gate shows the reason why you can't get out. So can I ask you to try one more time?
B: Sure. I'll go then, okay?
A: Yup.
B: See.
A: Oh, okay.
B: Did you find the cause?
A: Yeah, your balance is low. You can recharge it over there, so let's recharge it and try again. Do you want to charge? Do you want to pay only the difference?
B: Which should I do?
A: That's up to you. If you still plan to take the train, you should recharge it. If you don't need the train any more, you should pay the difference.
B: I see. I'll recharge it then. Which machine should I use?
A: Um, either one is fine.
B: Okay, I just put it here?
A: Yup. If you press here, it'll be in English.
B: Oh, nice. Will it be enough for about 2000 yen?
A: Here is written the shortage. If you still plan to take the train, it might be OK to put that much in.
B: Okay. Yes! It's done.
A: OK, let's see what happens.
B: Oh, nice. Thank you. Thank you very much.
A: Good for you. Have a nice day!
B: Thanks! You too.
re re A & B Talk 76
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know how?
A: What's going on?
B: The ticket gate won't open.
A: I see.
Did you use an Ic card?
A: Maybe you need to recharge it.
I think the ticket gate shows the reason why you can't get out.
So can I ask you to try one more time?
B: Sure.
I'll go then, okay?
A: Yup.
B: See.
A: Oh, okay.
B: Did you find the cause?
A: Yeah, your balance is low.
You can recharge it over there, so let's recharge it and try again.
Do you want to charge it?
Do you want to pay only the difference?
B: Which should I do?
A: That's up to you.
If you still plan to take the train, you should recharge it.
If you don't need the train any more, you should pay the difference.
B: I see.
I'll recharge it then.
Which machine should I use?
A: Um, either one is fine.
B: Okay, I just put it here?
A: Yup.
If you press here, it'll be in English.
B: Oh, nice.
Will it2000 yen be enough for about 2000 yen?
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: HerThe shortage is written the shortagre.
This sounds more natural in the US.
If you still plan to take the train, it might be OK to put that much in.
B: Okay.
Yes!
It's done.
A: OK, let's see what happens.
B: Oh, nice.
Thank you.
Thank you very much.
A: Good for you.
Have a nice day!
B: Thanks!
You too.
Feedback
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A: What's going on?
Alt: What's up?
(When someone approaches you with a problem, you can say this.)
So can I ask you to try one more time?
Alt: Can you try again?
B: SeeMake sure to look.
I didn't quite understand the use of see here -- I assume you meant they are asking them to look at the gate.
B: Did you find the cause?
B: Did you find out what's up?
(More informal)
Do you want to charge it?
B: Which should I do?
Alt: What should I do?
A: That's up to you.
Alt: (It's) up to you.
(Can be shortened.)
Will it2000 yen be enough for about 2000 yen?
A: HereWhat you're short on is written the shortagre.
A: Good for you.
Alt: I'm glad.
(I would not use "good for you" here because it tends to be used sarcastically.)
Feedback
Great job!
July 18, 2022
Thank you so much!!๐โโ๏ธ
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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to speak like a native!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can change whatever you want! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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๐ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know how? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: What's going on? A: What's going on? Alt: What's up? (When someone approaches you with a problem, you can say this.) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: The ticket gate won't open. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Did you use an Ic card? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Yes. |
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A: Maybe you need to recharge it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think ticket gate shows the reason why you can't get out. I think the ticket gate shows the reason why you can't get out. |
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So can I ask you to try one more time? So can I ask you to try one more time? Alt: Can you try again? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Sure. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'll go then, okay? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Yup. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: See. B: I didn't quite understand the use of see here -- I assume you meant they are asking them to look at the gate. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Oh, okay. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Did you find the cause? B: Did you find the cause? B: Did you find out what's up? (More informal) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Yeah, your balance is low. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can recharge it over there, so let's recharge it and try again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Do you want to charge? Do you want to charge it? Do you want to charge it? |
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Do you want to pay only the difference? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you still plan to take the train, you should recharge it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you don't need the train any more, you should pay the difference. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'll recharge it then. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Which machine should I use? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Um, either one is fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Okay, I just put it here? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Yup. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you press here, it'll be in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Oh, nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Will it be enough for about 2000 yen? Will Will This sounds more natural in the US. |
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If you still plan to take the train, it might be OK to put that much in. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yes! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's done. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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