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sho

July 16, 2022

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re re A & B Talk 64

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


A: Hey, what's wrong?
B: I might've dropped my wallet somewhere.
A: Have you checked all the pockets?
B: Yeah.
A: Take again look carefully and calmly. Look in your pants, bag, and pockets.
B: Okay.
Nothing.
A: What about your hip or breast pocket? Or the side of your bag?
B: Nothing.
A: Then try to remember when you last had it. If you can't remember, think about when you left home today.
B: Well, I had it until I was on the train, so maybe I dropped it there.
A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now so tell me what station you got on, what line you were on, and where you were going. Also, if you remember, please tell me what time too.
B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't remember the rest of the stations.
A: Which station were you trying to get to?
B: Tokyo station.
A: About what time did you get on the train?
B: Around 2:00 p.m.
A: Wait a minute. So this is the way to go? (shows the app)
B: Ummm, no, it's not.
A: Then this one?
B: Oh, maybe this one. A: Okay.
A: Okay. I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.
B: Ok. 000.
A: Okay.
The station staff will look for it and call you if they find it. They may find it today, or someone may deliver it to the station later. I don't know when they'll call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.
B: Okay. That was really helpful. Thank you very much.
A: You dropped your wallet, do you have any money?
B: I put some coins in my pocket, so I have some.
A: Will you be able to go home?
B: Yeah, I think so.
A: Take this just in case.
B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, that's too much money.
A: It's not that much, but it'll let you do some more sightseeing, right? Since you came all the way to Japan, you can do more sightseeing with this.
B: Oh my gosh. Are you sure?
A: Sure.
B: Thank you very much. I will definitely repay you someday. May I have your phone number?
A: No, it's alright. Well, if you find the wallet, donate some of the money somewhere. I'd like it to go to animals who are about to be put down.
B: Okay. I'll definitely do that!
A: Thank you so much. Anyway, have a nice trip now! Take care!
B: Oh, thank you very much.
A: You're very welcome. Bye!
B: I hope to see you again!
A: You too!

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re re A & B Talk 64

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Hey, what's wrong?

B: I might've dropped my wallet somewhere.

A: Have you checked all theof your pockets?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Yeah.

A: Takery again l. Look carefully and calmly.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Look in your pants, bag, and pockets.

B: Okay.

Nothing.

A: What about your hip or breast pocket?

Or the side of your bag?

B: Nothing.

A: Then try to remember when you last had it.

If you can't remember, think about when you left home today.

B: Well, I had it until I was on the train, so maybe I dropped it there.

A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now so tell me what station you got on, what line you were on, and where you were going.

Also, if you remember, please tell me what timehe time was, too.

I missed this the first time. This is better.

B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't remember the rest of the stations.

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Which station were you trying to get to?

B: Tokyo sStation.

A: About what time did you get on the train?

B: Around 2:00 p.m.

A: Wait a minute.

So this is the way to goyou went?

(shows the app)

B: Ummm, no, it's not.

A: ThenHow about this one?

B: Oh, maybe thisat's the one.

A: Okay.

A: Okay.

I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and g. Give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Ok. 000.

A: Okay.

The station staff will look for it and call you if they find it.

They may find it today, or someone may deliver it torop it off at the station later.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I don't know when they'll call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Okay.

That was really helpful.

Thank you very much.

A: You dropped your wallet, do you have any money?

B: I put some coins in my pocket, so I have some.

A: Will you be able to go home?

B: Yeah, I think so.

A: Take this just in case.

B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, that's too much money.

A: It's not that much, but it'll let you do some more sightseeing, right?

Since you came all the way to Japan, you can do more sightseeing with this.

B: Oh, my gosh.

Are you sure?

A: Sure.

B: Thank you very much.

I will definitely repay you someday.

May I have your phone number?

A: No, it's alright.

Well, if you find the wallet, donate some of the money somewhere.

I'd like it to go to an animals who are about to be put down shelter.

Sorry, I gave you this correction earlier but now it sounds kind of strange. This is better.

B: Okay.

I'll definitely do that!

A: Thank you so much.

Anyway, have a nice trip now!

Take care!

B: Oh, thank you very much.

A: You're very welcome.

Bye!

B: I hope to see you again!

A: You too!

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re re A & B Talk 64

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

B: I might'vethink I dropped my wallet somewhere.

A: HaveDid you checked all thealready check your pockets?

A: Take againnother look but carefully and calmly this time.

A: Then try to remember where and when you last had it.

A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now so t. Tell me whatich station you got onwere you at, what line you weregot on, and where you were going.

Also, if you remember, please tell me what time too.around what time were you on the train?

The station staff will look for it and will call you if they find it.

They may find it today, or someone may deliverbring it to the station later on.

more natural

A: YSince you dropped your wallet, do you still have any money?

A: It's not that much, but it'll letallow you to do some more sightseeing, right?.

A: SureYep, I'm sure. It's really no big deal.

I'd like it to go to the animals who are about to be shelters and be used to prevent animals from being put down.

Anyway, have a nice trip now!

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sho

July 18, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

B: Tokyo station.


B: Tokyo sStation.

re re A & B Talk 64


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


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You can change whatever you want!


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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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A: Hey, what's wrong?


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B: I might've dropped my wallet somewhere.


B: I might'vethink I dropped my wallet somewhere.

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A: Have you checked all the pockets?


A: HaveDid you checked all thealready check your pockets?

A: Have you checked all theof your pockets?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Yeah.


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A: Take again look carefully and calmly.


A: Take againnother look but carefully and calmly this time.

A: Takery again l. Look carefully and calmly.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Look in your pants, bag, and pockets.


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B: Okay.


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Nothing.


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A: What about your hip or breast pocket?


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Or the side of your bag?


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B: Nothing.


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A: Then try to remember when you last had it.


A: Then try to remember where and when you last had it.

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If you can't remember, think about when you left home today.


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B: Well, I had it until I was on the train, so maybe I dropped it there.


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A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now so tell me what station you got on, what line you were on, and where you were going.


A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now so t. Tell me whatich station you got onwere you at, what line you weregot on, and where you were going.

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Also, if you remember, please tell me what time too.


Also, if you remember, please tell me what time too.around what time were you on the train?

Also, if you remember, please tell me what timehe time was, too.

I missed this the first time. This is better.

B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't remember the rest of the stations.


B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't remember the rest of the stations.

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Which station were you trying to get to?


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A: About what time did you get on the train?


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B: Around 2:00 p.m.


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A: Wait a minute.


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So this is the way to go?


So this is the way to goyou went?

(shows the app)


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B: Ummm, no, it's not.


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A: Then this one?


A: ThenHow about this one?

B: Oh, maybe this one.


B: Oh, maybe thisat's the one.

A: Okay.


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A: Okay.


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I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.


I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and g. Give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Ok. 000.


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A: Okay.


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The station staff will look for it and call you if they find it.


The station staff will look for it and will call you if they find it.

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They may find it today, or someone may deliver it to the station later.


They may find it today, or someone may deliverbring it to the station later on.

more natural

They may find it today, or someone may deliver it torop it off at the station later.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I don't know when they'll call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.


I don't know when they'll call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Okay.


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That was really helpful.


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Thank you very much.


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A: You dropped your wallet, do you have any money?


A: YSince you dropped your wallet, do you still have any money?

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B: I put some coins in my pocket, so I have some.


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A: Will you be able to go home?


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B: Yeah, I think so.


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A: Take this just in case.


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B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, that's too much money.


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A: It's not that much, but it'll let you do some more sightseeing, right?


A: It's not that much, but it'll letallow you to do some more sightseeing, right?.

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Since you came all the way to Japan, you can do more sightseeing with this.


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B: Oh my gosh.


B: Oh, my gosh.

Are you sure?


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A: Sure.


A: SureYep, I'm sure. It's really no big deal.

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B: Thank you very much.


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I will definitely repay you someday.


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May I have your phone number?


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A: No, it's alright.


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Well, if you find the wallet, donate some of the money somewhere.


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I'd like it to go to animals who are about to be put down.


I'd like it to go to the animals who are about to be shelters and be used to prevent animals from being put down.

I'd like it to go to an animals who are about to be put down shelter.

Sorry, I gave you this correction earlier but now it sounds kind of strange. This is better.

B: Okay.


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I'll definitely do that!


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A: Thank you so much.


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Anyway, have a nice trip now!


Anyway, have a nice trip now!

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Take care!


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B: Oh, thank you very much.


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A: You're very welcome.


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Bye!


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B: I hope to see you again!


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A: You too!


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