sho's avatar
sho

July 13, 2022

0
re A & B Talk64

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


A: Hey, what's wrong?
B: I might've dropped my wallet somewhere.
A: Oh, no. First, look in your pants, bag, and pockets again.
B: Okay.
Nothing.
A: What about your hip or shirt pocket? Or the side pocket of your bag?
B: Nothing.
A: Then try to remember when you last had it. If you can't remember, think about when you left home today.
B: Well, I had it until I was on the train, so maybe I dropped it there.
A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now so tell me what station you got on, what line you were on, and where you were going. Also, if you remember, please tell me what time too.
B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't remember the rest of the stations.
A: Which station were you trying to get to?
B: Tokyo station.
A: About what time did you get on the train?
B: Around 2:00 p.m.
A: Wait a minute. So this is the way to go? (shows the app)
B: Ummm, no, it's not.
A: Then this one?
B: Oh, maybe this one. A: Okay.
A: Okay. I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.
B: Ok. 000.
A: Okay.
The station staff will look for it and call you if they find it. They may find it today, or someone may deliver it to the station later. I don't know when they'll call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.
B: Okay. That was really helpful. Thank you very much.
A: You dropped your wallet, do you have any money?
B: I put some coins in my pocket, so I have some.
A: Will you be able to go home?
B: Yeah, I think so.
A: Take this just in case.
B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, that's too much money.
A: It's not that much, but it'll let you do some more sightseeing, right? Since you came all the way to Japan, you can do more sightseeing with this.
B: Oh my gosh. Are you sure?
A: Sure.
B: Thank you very much. I will definitely repay you someday. May I have your phone number?
A: No, it's alright. Well, if you find the wallet, donate some money somewhere. I'd like it to go to animals animals about to be put down.
B: Okay. I'll definitely do that!
A: Thank you so much. Anyway, have a nice trip now! Take care!
B: Oh, thank you very much.
A: You're very welcome. Bye!
B: I hope to see you again!
A: You too!

Corrections

re A & B Talk64

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Hey, what's wrong?

B: I might've dropped my wallet somewhere.

A: Oh, no.

Firstly, look in your pants, bag, and pockets againtwice.

Doesnโ€™t make sense person questioning would know the narrator had looked in their pants in the past.

B: Okay.

Nothing.

A: What about your hip or shirbreast pocket?

Specific name for the pocket; shirt pocket is just wrong

Or the side pocket of your bag?

More colloquial. Inferred.

B: Nothing.

A: Then try to remember when you last had it.

If you can't remember, think about when you left home today.

B: Well, I had it until I was on the train, so maybe I dropped it there.

A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now so tell me what station you got on, what line you were on, and where you were going.

Also, if you remember, please tell me what time too.

B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't remember the rest of the stations.

A: Which station were you trying to get to?

B: Tokyo station.

A: About what time did you get on the train?

B: Around 2:00 p.m.

A: Wait a minute.

So this is the way to go?

(shows the app)

B: Ummm, no, it's not.

A: Then this one?

B: Oh, maybe this one.

A: Okay.

A: Okay.

I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.

B: Ok. 000.

A: Okay.

The station staff will look for it and call you if they find it.

They may find it today, or someone may deliver it to the station later.

I don't know when they'll call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.

B: Okay.

That was really helpful.

Thank you very much.

A: You dropped your wallet, do you have any money?

B: I put some coins in my pocket, so I have some.

A: Will you be able to go home?

B: Yeah, I think so.

A: Take this just in case.

B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, that's too much money.

A: It's not that much, but it'll let you do some more sightseeing, right?

Since you came all the way to Japan, you can do more sightseeing with this.

B: Oh my gosh.

Are you sure?

A: Sure.

B: Thank you very much.

I will definitely repay you someday.

May I have your phone number?

A: No, it's alright.

This is a tone of non-politeness; A: Sorry, but no = polite rejection.

Well, if you find the wallet, donate some of the money somewhere.

Specific reference needs โ€œtheโ€.

I'd like it to go to animals... animals about to be put down.

B: Okay.

I'll definitely do that!

A: Thank you so much.

Anyway, have a nice trip now!

Take care!

B: Oh, thank you very much.

A: You're very welcome.

Bye!

B: I hope to see you again!

A: You too!

Feedback

Circular but pretty good.

sho's avatar
sho

July 14, 2022

0

Thank you so much!!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I've learned a lot!โœ๏ธ

re A & B Talk64

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Hey, what's wrong?

B: I might've dropped my wallet somewhere.

A: Oh, no.

First, look in your pants, bag, and pockets again.

B: Okay.

Nothing.

A: What about your hip or shirt pocket?

Or the side pocket of your bag?

B: Nothing.

A: Then try to remember when you last had it.

If you can't remember, think about when you left home today.

B: Well, I had it until I was on the train, so maybe I dropped it there.

A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now so tell me what station you got on, what line you were on, and where you were going.

Also, if you remember, please tell me what time too.

B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't remember the rest of the stations.

A: Which station were you trying to get to?

B: Tokyo station.

A: About what time did you get on the train?

B: Around 2:00 p.m.

A: Wait a minute.

So this is the way to go?

(shows the app)

B: Ummm, no, it's not.

A: Then this one?

B: Oh, maybe this one.

A: Okay.

A: Okay.

I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.

B: Ok. 000.

A: Okay.

The station staff will look for it and call you if they find it.

They may find it today, or someone may deliver it to the station later.

I don't know when they'll call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.

B: Okay.

That was really helpful.

Thank you very much.

A: You dropped your wallet, do you have any money?

B: I put some coins in my pocket, so I have some.

A: Will you be able to go home?

B: Yeah, I think so.

A: Take this just in case.

B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, that's too much money.

A: It's not that much, but it'll let you do some more sightseeing, right?

Since you came all the way to Japan, you can do more sightseeing with this.

B: Oh my gosh.

Are you sure?

A: Sure.

B: Thank you very much.

I will definitely repay you someday.

May I have your phone number?

A: No, it's alright.

Well, if you find the wallet, donate some money somewhere.

I'd like it to go to animals animalswho are about to be put downto sleep.

Your sentence is correct but this is another way to say it. It's less direct.

ๆ‚ฒใ—ใใ†๏ผ

B: Okay.

I'll definitely do that!

A: Thank you so much.

Anyway, have a nice trip now!

Take care!

B: Oh, thank you very much.

A: You're very welcome.

Bye!

B: I hope to see you again!

A: You too!

Feedback

ใพใŸใ„ใ„ๆ›ธใ็›ดใ—ใงใ™ใ€‚ใ‚ˆใๅ‡บๆฅใพใ—ใŸ๏ผ

sho's avatar
sho

July 14, 2022

0

ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ๐Ÿ˜

B: Yeah, I think so.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

re A & B Talk64


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or you can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Hey, what's wrong?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: I might've dropped my wallet somewhere.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Oh, no.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

First, look in your pants, bag, and pockets again.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Firstly, look in your pants, bag, and pockets againtwice.

Doesnโ€™t make sense person questioning would know the narrator had looked in their pants in the past.

B: Okay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Nothing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: What about your hip or shirt pocket?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: What about your hip or shirbreast pocket?

Specific name for the pocket; shirt pocket is just wrong

Or the side pocket of your bag?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or the side pocket of your bag?

More colloquial. Inferred.

B: Nothing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Then try to remember when you last had it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you can't remember, think about when you left home today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Well, I had it until I was on the train, so maybe I dropped it there.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now so tell me what station you got on, what line you were on, and where you were going.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, if you remember, please tell me what time too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't remember the rest of the stations.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Which station were you trying to get to?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Tokyo station.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: About what time did you get on the train?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Around 2:00 p.m.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Wait a minute.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So this is the way to go?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(shows the app)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Ummm, no, it's not.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Then this one?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Oh, maybe this one.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Okay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Okay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Ok. 000.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Okay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The station staff will look for it and call you if they find it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They may find it today, or someone may deliver it to the station later.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't know when they'll call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Okay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That was really helpful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you very much.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: You dropped your wallet, do you have any money?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: I put some coins in my pocket, so I have some.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Will you be able to go home?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Take this just in case.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, that's too much money.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: It's not that much, but it'll let you do some more sightseeing, right?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Since you came all the way to Japan, you can do more sightseeing with this.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Oh my gosh.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Are you sure?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Sure.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Thank you very much.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will definitely repay you someday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

May I have your phone number?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: No, it's alright.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: No, it's alright.

This is a tone of non-politeness; A: Sorry, but no = polite rejection.

Well, if you find the wallet, donate some money somewhere.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Well, if you find the wallet, donate some of the money somewhere.

Specific reference needs โ€œtheโ€.

I'd like it to go to animals animals about to be put down.


I'd like it to go to animals animalswho are about to be put downto sleep.

Your sentence is correct but this is another way to say it. It's less direct. ๆ‚ฒใ—ใใ†๏ผ

I'd like it to go to animals... animals about to be put down.

B: Okay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll definitely do that!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Thank you so much.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Anyway, have a nice trip now!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Take care!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Oh, thank you very much.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: You're very welcome.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Bye!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: I hope to see you again!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: You too!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium