July 13, 2022
re A & B Talk 69
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, do you know any restaurants nearby?
A: I don't live here, so I don't really know. I'm sure there are a lot. I'll check it out. What are you in the mood for?
B: Like what kind of restaurants?
A: I just browsed and I found some Italian restaurants, and a Japanese place with sushi, ramen, and yakitori. I think you can find most of dishes. How much were you looking to spend?
B: Well, about 2,000 yen.
A: I see. Gimme a minute. I can show you some pictures of the restaurants around here.
B: Thanks!
A: Here you go. They're in no particular order. Some of the pictures might show other restaurants here.
B: Oh, nice!
A: What do you think?
B: This place looks nice. Is this fried chicken?
A: It's "Karaage". It's like fried chicken.
B: What's the difference?
A: Well, I'm not sure, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter. Maybe.
B: I see.
A: So what do you want to do? Go for "Karaage"?
B: Yes! I'll try it and see what it's like.
A: Good idea! I'll check the route. Oops, I'm sorry, this place isn't close by. But I'm sure there's something else! So can you choose from the rest?
B: No worries. Well, here then!
A: Oh, tempura! Ok! I got it! Oops, I'm sorry. This restaurant isn't close by either. Next time, if there wasn't a restaurant close by, I'll make you a dish you actually want to eat.
B: Okay, haha. So, here then! Ramen!
A: Hold on a sec... Okay! There it is close by!
Wait a minute. There's the place you chose, and there're other places too! Here.
B: Oh, nice. Well, can you guess what flavor this is?
A: Umm, miso, I think. And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen.
B: Tsukemen?
The soup and noodles are served separately and dipped in a another bowl of soup or broth. It's very popular in Japan.
B: I see. Well, hmm... Let me see. This place looks good. I'll go there.
A: This place? This place is probably serves miso ramen. Is this okay?
B: Yes.
A: Ok, one minute, I'll show you the way, let me pull up the directions in the appq.
B: Oh, thanks!
A: No problem. Okay, let's go.
B: Isn't it right there?
A: Uh, no, it's not.
Here we are! This is it.
B: Thank you very much!
A: No problem. Have a nice day!
B: Thanks! You too!
re A & B Talk 69
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!
Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
Sounds more colloquial
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, do you know any restaurants nearby?
A: I don't live here, so I don't really know.
I'm sure there are a lot.
I'll check it out.
What are you in the mood for?
B: Like what kind of restaurants?
Sounds more colloquial; no need to repeat what we already know.
A: I just browsed and I found some Italian restaurants, and a Japanese place with sushi, ramen, and yakitori.
I think you can find most of those dishes.
Referencing multiple.
T; they're in no particular order.
No need for another line
Some of the pictures might show other restaurants here, too.
Here is correct, but too sounds more correct like additionally
B: Oh, nice!
A: What do you think?
B: This place looks nice.
Is thisat fried chicken?
Assuming youโre referring to the photo, you would say that.
A: It's "Karaage".
It's like fried chicken.
B: What's the difference?
A: Well, I'm not sure, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter.
MaybBut Iโm not sure.
Better; more cohesive.
B: I see.
A: So what do you want to do?
Go for "Karaage"?
B: Yes!
I'll try it and see what it's like.
A: Good idea!
I'll check the route.
Oops, I'm sorry, but this place isn't close by.
Cohesive.
But I'm sure there's something else!
So can you choose from the rest?
B: No worries.
Well, here then!
A: Oh, tempura!
Ok!
I got it!
Oops, I'm sorry.
Thisat restaurant isn't close by either.
That refers to distance, this in this context would be very specific.
Next time, if there wasn'โs not a restaurant close by, I'll make you a dish youโd actually want to eat.!
You WOULD needs to be used because you are referring to the future.
B: Okay, haha.
So, here then!
Ramen!
A: Hold on a sec...
Okay!
There it is close by!
Wait a minute.
There's the place you chose, and there're other places too!
Here.
B: Oh, nice.
Well, can you guess what flavor this is?
A: Umm, miso, I think.
And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen.
B: Tsukemen?
The soup and noodles are served separately and dipped in a another bowl of soup or broth.
It's very popular in Japan.
B: I see.
Well, hmm... Let me see.
This place looks good.
I'll go there.
A: This place?
This place is probably serves miso ramen.
Is this okay?
B: Yes.
A: Ok, one minute, I'll show you the way, let me pull up the directions in the appq.
B: Oh, thanks!
A: No problem.
Okay, let's go.
B: Isn't it right there?
A: Uh, no, it's not.
Here we are!
This is it.
B: Thank you very much!
A: No problem.
Have a nice day!
B: Thanks!
You too!
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Pretty good just need cohesiveness and future tense/future ideas work.
July 14, 2022
Thank you so much!!๐โโ๏ธ
I've learned a lot!โ๏ธ
re A & B Talk 69
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
No correction. Just yay!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!
Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, do you know any restaurants nearby?
A: I don't live here, so I don't really know.
I'm sure there are a lot.
I'll check it out.
What are you in the mood for?
B: Like what kind of restaurants?
A: I just browseddid a search and I found some Italian restaurants, and a Japanese place with sushi, ramen, and yakitori.
Your sentence is correct but in the US, we usually use the set phrase, "I did a search," or "I'll so a search ..."
I think you can find most of dishesanything.
This sentence is so common in the US.
How much were you looking to spend?
B: Well, about 2,000 yen.
A: I see.
Gimme a minute.
I can show you some pictures of the restaurants around here.
B: Thanks!
A: Here you go.
They're in no particular order.
Some of the pictures might show other restaurants here.
B: Oh, nice!
A: What do you think?
B: This place looks nice.
Is this fried chicken?
A: It's "Karaage".
It's like fried chicken.
B: What's the difference?
A: Well, I'm not sure, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by theits batter.
This is okay, too.
Maybe.
B: I see.
A: So what do you want to do?
Go for "Karaage"?
B: Yes!
I'll try it and see what it's like.
A: Good idea!
I'll check the route.
Oops, I'm sorry, this place isn't close by.
But I'm sure there's something else!
So can you choose from the rest?
B: No worries.
Well, here then!
A: Oh, tempura!
Ok!
I got it!
Oops, I'm sorry.
This restaurant isn't close by either.
Next time, if there waisn't a restaurant close nearby, I'll make you a dish you actually want to eat.
We use present tense here because it hasn't happened yet.
B: Okay, haha.
So, here then!
Ramen!
A: Hold on a sec...
Okay!
There itis is close by!
Wait a minute.
There's the place you chose, and there're other places too!
Here.
B: Oh, nice.
Well, can you guess what flavor this is?
A: Umm, miso, I think.
And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen.
B: Tsukemen?
The soup and noodles are served separately and dipped in a another bowl of soup or broth.
We know it has to be another bowl so we don't have to say it.
It's very popular in Japan.
B: I see.
Well, hmm... Let me see.
This place looks good.
I'll go there.
A: This place?
This place is probably serves miso ramen.
Is this okay?
B: Yes.
A: Ok, one minute, I'll show you the way, let me pull up the directions in the appq.
B: Oh, thanks!
A: No problem.
Okay, let's go.
B: Isn't it right there?
A: Uh, no, it's not.
Here we are!
This is it.
B: Thank you very much!
A: No problem.
Have a nice day!
B: Thanks!
You too!
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