June 10, 2021
Ambulence was massively hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious by-standers.
My colleague did not show up at work today, because she's shattered by an all-nighter that got ordered by her boss.
Our website traffic is down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow.
Sentences 135: Hamper, shattered, blip
AThe ambuleance was massivseverely hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious by-standers.
The ambulance was severely hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious bystanders.
My colleague did not show up ato work today, because she's got shattered by an all-nighter that got ordered by her bossher boss put her through.
My colleague did not show up to work today, because she got shattered by an all-nighter her boss put her through.
Using "shattered" on a person feels weird to me. Shatter is usually used when objects made of glass, porcelain, etc. break into many pieces.
Our website's traffic iswent down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow.
Our website's traffic went down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow.
How is it possible for your traffic to go down by 200%? Wouldn't that mean your traffic is negative? Or am I missing something?
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Ambulence was massively hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious by-standers.
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My colleague did not show up at work today, because she's shattered by an all-nighter that got ordered by her boss.
My colleague did not show up Using "shattered" on a person feels weird to me. Shatter is usually used when objects made of glass, porcelain, etc. break into many pieces. |
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Our website traffic is down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow.
Our website's traffic How is it possible for your traffic to go down by 200%? Wouldn't that mean your traffic is negative? Or am I missing something? |
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