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June 10, 2021

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Sentences 135: Hamper, shattered, blip

Ambulence was massively hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious by-standers.
My colleague did not show up at work today, because she's shattered by an all-nighter that got ordered by her boss.
Our website traffic is down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow.

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Sentences 135: Hamper, shattered, blip

Sentences 135: Hamper, shattered, blip


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Ambulence was massively hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious by-standers.


AThe ambuleance was massivseverely hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious by-standers. The ambulance was severely hampered in getting to the injured person due to curious bystanders.

My colleague did not show up at work today, because she's shattered by an all-nighter that got ordered by her boss.


My colleague did not show up ato work today, because she's got shattered by an all-nighter that got ordered by her bossher boss put her through. My colleague did not show up to work today, because she got shattered by an all-nighter her boss put her through.

Using "shattered" on a person feels weird to me. Shatter is usually used when objects made of glass, porcelain, etc. break into many pieces.

Our website traffic is down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow.


Our website's traffic iswent down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow. Our website's traffic went down by 200% but I hope it's a just a blip and we're back to normal tomorrow.

How is it possible for your traffic to go down by 200%? Wouldn't that mean your traffic is negative? Or am I missing something?

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