I think a positive attitude and an honest heart makes someone beautiful. I think a positive attitude and an honest heart make someone beautiful.

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I think a positive attitude and an honest heart makes someone beautiful. I think a positive attitude and an honest heart make someone beautiful.

I think that a positive attitude and an honest heart makes someone beautiful. I think that a positive attitude and an honest heart makes someone beautiful.

Even if they look good on the surface, I can't feel attractions without insidener beauty. Even if they look good on the surface, I can't feel attraction without inner beauty.

Here "inner" is the correct word

Even if they look good on the surface, I can't feel any attractions without inside beauty. Even if they look good on the surface, I can't feel any attraction without inside beauty.

Even if they look good on the surfacoutside, I can't feel attractions without insidener beauty. Even if they look good on the outside, I can't feel attraction without inner beauty.

More natural when speaking about a person

Even when they look good on the surface, I can't feel attractions without insidener beauty. Even when they look good on the surface, I can't feel attraction without inner beauty.

Is my thinking too youngnaive? Is my thinking too naive?

"Naive" has connotations of being young and inexperienced. I think this is a word that captures what you intended to say.

Is my thinking too youngnaive? Is my thinking too naive?

Is my thinking too young? Is my thinking too young?

Is my think too youway of thinking wrong? Is my way of thinking wrong?

I've been trying to polish my mindbetter myself in order to be a good man. I've been trying to better myself in order to be a good man.

"Polish my mind" feels like an unusual phrase, so I substituted it for a more common one with the same theme. People often talk about bettering themselves.

I've been trying to polish my mind to be a good man. I've been trying to polish my mind to be a good man.

I've been trying to polish my mind to be a good man. I've been trying to polish my mind to be a good man.

There's nothing wrong with your English here, but it would sound a bit unusual ("polish my mind"). A similar phrase might be, "I've been self-reflecting with the aim of becoming a better person."

I've been trying to polishimroive my mind to be a good man. I've been trying to imroive my mind to be a good man.