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You are right, but that is all that I can do at present. No English speakers around me, so I never have the chance to speak with them. Besides, I don’t think I have the ability to talk to English speakers now. I have a lot of shortcomings, such as vocabulary and grammar. I think the main work I should do now is listen more, read more, write more and try to speak to myself more. However, thank you for your suggestion about learning English and I will take it as a big concern.

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No English speakers around me, so I never have the chance to speak with them.

I have a lot of shortcomings, such as vocabulary and grammar.

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Jack

Feb. 18, 2021

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I think the main workthings I should dowork on right now is to listen more, read more, write more and try to speak to myself more.

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Jack

Feb. 18, 2021

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However, thank you for your suggestions about learning English and I will take it as a big concerninto account.

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Feb. 18, 2021

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Feb. 18, 2021

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I think the main work I should do now ismy focus should be listening more, reading more, writeing more and trying to speak to myself more.

Your sentence made sense, but in my experience people say "my focus" instead of "my main work"

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You are right, but that is all that I can do at present.


You a're right, but that is all that I can do at present. You're right, but that is all that I can do at present.

No English speakers around me, so I never have the chance to speak with them.


NThere are no English speakers around me, so I never have the chance to speak with them. There are no English speakers around me, so I never have the chance to speak with them.

Here, the word 'so' is connecting two independent clauses (ie, two complete sentences). I added 'there are' so there was a verb.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Besides, I don’t think I have the ability to talk to English speakers now.


Besides, I don’t think I have the ability to talk to English speakers right now. Besides, I don’t think I have the ability to talk to English speakers right now.

I have a lot of shortcomings, such as vocabulary and grammar.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think the main work I should do now is listen more, read more, write more and try to speak to myself more.


I think the main work I should do now ismy focus should be listening more, reading more, writeing more and trying to speak to myself more. I think my focus should be listening more, reading more, writing more and trying to speak to myself more.

Your sentence made sense, but in my experience people say "my focus" instead of "my main work"

I think the main workthings I should dowork on right now is to listen more, read more, write more and try to speak to myself more. I think the main things I should work on right now is to listen more, read more, write more and try to speak to myself more.

However, thank you for your suggestion about learning English and I will take it as a big concern.


However, thank you for your suggestions about learning English and I will take it as a big concerninto account. However, thank you for your suggestions about learning English and I will take it into account.

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