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Sumomo

Sept. 14, 2021

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Taking A Nap

I went to an elementary school to teach Japanese today. When I was talking with children, I was really enjoying it. After the lessons, when I wrote a report, I felt that something unusual in my vision. That was like innumerable very small light are flickering. I really dislike this because once it caused, I can't read or watch anything. I've got the same experiences until now and they usually caused when I had not got enough sleep. Actually, after taking a nap, I felt much better. I should care about my eyes and try to get enough sleep.

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Taking A Nap

I went to an elementary school to teach Japanese today.

Actually, after taking a nap, I felt much better.

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Sumomo

Sept. 15, 2021

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Taking A Nap


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I went to an elementary school to teach Japanese today.


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When I was talking with children, I was really enjoying it.


WI found it really enjoyable when I was talking with the children, I was really enjoying it. I found it really enjoyable when I was talking with the children.

After the lessons, when I wrote a report, I felt that something unusual in my vision.


After the lessons, when I wroteas writing a report, I felt thatsaw something unusual in my field of vision. After the lessons, when I was writing a report, I saw something unusual in my field of vision.

That was like innumerable very small light are flickering.


ThaIt was like very small, innumerable very small light ares flickering. It was like very small, innumerable lights flickering.

I really dislike this because once it caused, I can't read or watch anything.


I really dislike ithis because once it causedoccurs, I can't read or watch anything. I really dislike it because once it occurs, I can't read or watch anything.

I've got the same experiences until now and they usually caused when I had not got enough sleep.


I've gothad the same experiences until nowbefore and they're usually caused when I had not got enoughby lack of sleep. I've had the same experiences before and they're usually caused by lack of sleep.

Actually, after taking a nap, I felt much better.


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I should care about my eyes and try to get enough sleep.


I should care abouttake care of my eyes and try to get enough sleep. I should take care of my eyes and try to get enough sleep.

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