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Febuary 14, 2026
Today I went bowling with my childhood friend Yusuf. It was my first time playing and it was fun. Afterwards, we sat down and drank caramel coffee. I enjoy exploring Istanbul. Later, I watched the Trabzonspor vs. Fenerbahçe match with my father and my uncle. Fenerbahçe won 4–3. It was a nice day.
Bugün çocukluk arkadaşım Yusuf ile bowling oynamaya gittim. İlk defa oynadım ve eğlenceliydi. Sonrasında oturup karamelli kahve içtik. İstanbul’u gezmeyi seviyorum. Daha sonra babam ve dayımla Trabzonspor – Fenerbahçe maçını izledim. Fenerbahçe 4–3 kazandı. Güzel bir
Febuary 14, 2026
Today, I went bowling with my childhood friend, Yusuf.
It was my first time playbowling, and it was fun.
I edited it to sound more natural.
Afterwards, we sat down and drank caramel coffee.
I enjoy exploring Istanbul.
Later, I watched the Trabzonspor vs. Fenerbahçe match with my father and my uncle.
Fenerbahçe won 4–3.
It was a nice day.
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Nice job!
I enjoyed exploring Istanbul.
Fenerbahçe won 4–3.
You could say, "Fenerbahçe won 4-3 in the end."
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The sentences are a little abrupt. Try to get them to flow into each other and keep a mix of large, complex, simple and small sentences.
Febuary 14, 2026
Today I went bowling with my childhood friend, Yusuf.
Use a comma to separate the name.
It was my first time playing, and it was fun.
These are two independent clauses connected with a coordinating conjunction (and) , so a comma is required.
*independent clauses are phrases that could be sentences on their own because they have a subject and a predicate
- It was my first time playing.
- It was fun.
*When you join two or more independent clauses together with 'and' or another FANBOYS, you need a comma.
*Have you heard of the coordinating conjunctions FANBOYS? (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so)
Afterwards, we sat down and drank caramel coffee.
I enjoy exploring Istanbul.
Later, I watched the Trabzonspor vs. Fenerbahçe match with my father and my uncle.
Fenerbahçe won 4–3.
It was a nice day.
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Nice! :)
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Today I went bowling with my childhood friend Yusuf. Today I went bowling with my childhood friend, Yusuf. Use a comma to separate the name. Today, I went bowling with my childhood friend, Yusuf. |
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It was my first time playing and it was fun. It was my first time playing, and it was fun. These are two independent clauses connected with a coordinating conjunction (and) , so a comma is required. *independent clauses are phrases that could be sentences on their own because they have a subject and a predicate - It was my first time playing. - It was fun. *When you join two or more independent clauses together with 'and' or another FANBOYS, you need a comma. *Have you heard of the coordinating conjunctions FANBOYS? (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) It was my first time I edited it to sound more natural. |
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