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Jan. 11, 2021

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RBG

Yesterday, I watched a documentary about Ruth Bader Ginsburg, RGB. I know that her death during the tenure of Donald Trump caused political conflict. But, I'm not familiar with what she did and why she is so popular.
Though I missed the first half of the documentary, I can understand that her modest personality and powerful statements have fascinated people.

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Yesterday, I watched a documentary about Ruth Bader Ginsburg, RGB (RBG).

I know that her death during the tenure of Donald Trump caused political conflict.

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But,I know that her death during the tenure of Donald Trump caused political conflict but I'm not familiar with what she did and why she is so popular.

Though I missed the first half of the documentary, I can understand thathow her modest personality and powerful statements have fascinated people.

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Terrific job!

RGBG

Yesterday, I watched a documentary about Ruth Bader Ginsburg, RGBG.

I know thathow her death during the tenure of Donald Trump's tenure caused political conflict.

"caused" feels too direct; consider "led to" instead

ButHowever, I'm not familiar with what she did and why she is so popular.

Though I missed the first half of the documentary, I can understand that her modest personality and powerful statements have fascinated people.

Yesterday, I watched a documentary about Ruth Bader Ginsburg, also known simply as RGB.

I know that her death during the tenure of Donald Trump caused political conflict.

ButHowever, I'm not familiar with what she did, and why she is so popular.

You can also add this onto the previous sentence or say "But I'm not sure what she did, so I don't know why she is so popular.

Though I missed the first half of the documentary, I can understand that her modest personality and powerful statements have fascinated people.

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I think that in some ways RGB became a political celebrity of sorts.

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RGBG

Yesterday, I watched a documentary about Ruth Bader Ginsburg, RGB.


Yesterday, I watched a documentary about Ruth Bader Ginsburg, also known simply as RGB.

Yesterday, I watched a documentary about Ruth Bader Ginsburg, RGBG.

Yesterday, I watched a documentary about Ruth Bader Ginsburg, RGB (RBG).

I know that her death during the tenure of Donald Trump caused political conflict.


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I know thathow her death during the tenure of Donald Trump's tenure caused political conflict.

"caused" feels too direct; consider "led to" instead

I know that her death during the tenure of Donald Trump caused political conflict.

Merged with next sentence ...

But, I'm not familiar with what she did and why she is so popular.


ButHowever, I'm not familiar with what she did, and why she is so popular.

You can also add this onto the previous sentence or say "But I'm not sure what she did, so I don't know why she is so popular.

ButHowever, I'm not familiar with what she did and why she is so popular.

But,I know that her death during the tenure of Donald Trump caused political conflict but I'm not familiar with what she did and why she is so popular.

Though I missed the first half of the documentary, I can understand that her modest personality and powerful statements have fascinated people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Though I missed the first half of the documentary, I can understand that her modest personality and powerful statements have fascinated people.

Though I missed the first half of the documentary, I can understand thathow her modest personality and powerful statements have fascinated people.

RBG


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