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Jan. 21, 2020

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I'm at school now.Once,I thought about how to prepare for a flight,and not miss it.Sometimes,I notice some people exaggerating their words,telling stories that sound more like fantasy than truth.Currently, about two hundred thousand people live in my city .There are approximately 5 minutes left 'til the end of the break time.I wish I could stop time to get things done.Well,that's all for now.Oh - I remember spinners were once a dime a dozen.

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Once, I thought about how to be prepare for a flight, and not to miss it.

Sometimes, I notice some people exaggerating their word,s, telling any stories that look like more "sound more like fantasy" than truth.

There are currently living roughlyCurrently, about two hundred thousand people in the city where I livelive in my city.

I could have kept more from your original sentence, but stylistically it feels very awkward to have repetition (e.g., currently, roughly, or people live where I live.)

There are approximately 5 minutes left 'til' the end of the break time.

'til === (un)til. The apostrophe goes where the missing letters are

I wish I could stop time to have myget things done.

Well, that's all for now.

Also,Oh - I remember spinners once werwere once a dime a dozen.

I'm at school now.


Random Thoughts or Ideas of mine


Once,I thought how to be prepare for a flight,and not to miss it.


Once, I thought about how to be prepare for a flight, and not to miss it.

Sometimes,I notice some people exaggerating their word,telling any stories that look like more "fantasy" than truth.


Sometimes, I notice some people exaggerating their word,s, telling any stories that look like more "sound more like fantasy" than truth.

There are currently living roughly two hundred thousand people in the city where I live.


There are currently living roughlyCurrently, about two hundred thousand people in the city where I livelive in my city.

I could have kept more from your original sentence, but stylistically it feels very awkward to have repetition (e.g., currently, roughly, or people live where I live.)

There are approximately 5 minutes left til' the end of the break time.


There are approximately 5 minutes left 'til' the end of the break time.

'til === (un)til. The apostrophe goes where the missing letters are

I wish I could stop time to have my things done.


I wish I could stop time to have myget things done.

Well,that's all for now.


Well, that's all for now.

Also,I remember spinners once were a dime a dozen.


Also,Oh - I remember spinners once werwere once a dime a dozen.

Once,I thought about how to prepare for a flight,and not miss it.


Sometimes,I notice some people exaggerating their words,telling stories that sound more like fantasy than truth.


Currently, about two hundred thousand people live in my city .


There are approximately 5 minutes left 'til the end of the break time.


I wish I could stop time to get things done.


Oh - I remember spinners were once a dime a dozen.


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