Dec. 28, 2021
In my opinion, being a president is so easy in that all you have to do are just two things.
One is to be powerful. To be specific, your country should own a super powerful military. The other is that your country should be very wealthy.
With these two things, you and your country can do everything.
With a strong military, your country won't be invaded by others, and it's the foundation of a nation. With a lot of money, your country can develop the economy, science and technology, education, medical care and so on.
I also believe that there are many people who can be presidents, but the key is how they can get that position.
Even cutting off more than half the population of one country, there are still many people who are capable of being a president, let alone other government officials.
So never admire those who have a higher position than you, they are not necessarily as capable as you, you just don't have that opportunity.
Furthermore, no matter what you do, you just have one life, so just try your best, do what you like, stay healthy and happy, and everyone can have a great life.
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Very readable! Maybe a bit a confusing only because sometimes it seems like you are talking about "being" a president and sometimes you are talking about "becoming" a president.
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To be specific, your country should own a super powerful military.
Your original sentence is grammatically correct. Logically however, ‘possess’ would be a better word than ‘own’. |
The other is that your country should be very wealthy. |
With these two things, you and your country can do everything. |
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With a lot of money, your country can develop the economy, science and technology, education, medical care and so on. With a lot of money, your country can develop |
I also believe that there are many people who can be presidents, but the key is how they can get that position. I also believe that there are many people who c |
Even cutting off more than half the population of one country, there are still many people who are capable of being a president, let alone other government officials. Even "Cutting off" does not fit in this sentence. Even |
So never admire those who have a higher position than you, they are not necessarily as capable as you, you just don't have that opportunity. So I rewrote to sound a bit more native. So never admire those who have a higher position than you, they are not necessarily as capable |
Furthermore, no matter what you do, you just have one life, so just try your best, do what you like, stay healthy and happy, and everyone can have a great life. |
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