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Jack

Dec. 28, 2021

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Time is always beautiful, and forever as well.
2022, I am sure you used to come, but I didn’t.
This time, what should I bring to you?

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Random Thoughts

Time is always beautiful, and forevereternal as well.

Forever is an adverb, eternal has a similar meaning as an adjective.
A concise way of saying this is: Time is beautiful and eternal

2022, I am sure you used to comearrived, but I didn’t.

I do not understand the meaning of this sentence.

"Used to come" is not something that is common. I would use it like "He used to come into this shop often, but he has not done so for a month"

This time, what should I bring to you?

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This is written like poetry, which does not always have to follow grammar rules. You do not have to take my corrections completely seriously if you like the way your sentences sound.

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Jack

Dec. 28, 2021

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Thank you very much. Yes, you can see this essay as poetry or prose poetry.

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Jack

Dec. 28, 2021

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2022, I am sure you used to comearrived, but I didn’t.

This sentence implies that time is cyclical, but we humans aren’t. So I say 2022 once came, but I didn’t.

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Jack

Dec. 28, 2021

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The first sentence means time is eternal. You can consider that every day is the same, so that is why I say "I am sure you used to come". The last sentence in fact is saying "I should work hard and do my best, so that I will live up to time"

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Time is always beautiful, and forever as well.


Time is always beautiful, and forevereternal as well.

Forever is an adverb, eternal has a similar meaning as an adjective. A concise way of saying this is: Time is beautiful and eternal

2022, I am sure you used to come, but I didn’t.


2022, I am sure you used to comearrived, but I didn’t.

I do not understand the meaning of this sentence. "Used to come" is not something that is common. I would use it like "He used to come into this shop often, but he has not done so for a month"

This time, what should I bring to you?


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