Nov. 29, 2021
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Sky and ground are a big stage and never change. The only one that changes is the players on the stage: from the last generation to the next generation, endless and never stop.
Random Thoughts
SThe sky and ground are a big stage and never change.
The only oneAll that changes is the players on the stage: from the last generation to the next generation, endless and never stopceasing.
"The only thing that changes" would also be fine, but "all that changes" sounds better here. Similarly, "ceasing" sounds more poetic than "stopping," and there is no need to repeat "generation."
Nov. 30, 2021
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Sky and ground are a big stage and never change.
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The only one that changes is the players on the stage: from the last generation to the next generation, endless and never stop.
"The only thing that changes" would also be fine, but "all that changes" sounds better here. Similarly, "ceasing" sounds more poetic than "stopping," and there is no need to repeat "generation." |
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