Oct. 13, 2023
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When I was young, people looked for their partners relying on other people to introduce someone to them.
Their relatives, colleagues, friends, classmates would introduce people to them to date.
So people didn't have much chance to get to know many opposite sex people, yet they could still get married at the right age and fewer of them got divorced later.
Nowadays, it is very easy to get to know opposite sex people for young people, since there are so many social apps. Young people can know as many opposite sex people as they want in a day.
However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.
Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.
(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best give birth age is before thirty.)
It seems unreasonable and contradictory. Can anyone tell me why?
When I was young, people looked for their partners by relying on other people to introduce someone to them.
So people didn't have much of a chance to get to know many people of the opposite sex people, yet they could still get married at the right age and fewer of them got divorced later.
Nowadays, it is very easy to get to know people of the opposite sex people for young people, since there are so many social apps.
Young people can know as many people of the opposite sex people as they want in a day.
'In a day, young people can meet...' sounds a bit more native. In English, we only use 'know' for people when we're saying we have met someone before, or asking if someone if they have met another person before.
However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.
Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.
(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best age to give birth age is before thirty.)
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It seems unreasonable and contradictory.
Oct. 19, 2023
Thank you very much.
Random Thought
When I was young, people looked for their partners relying on other people to introduce someone to them.
When I was young, people relied on other people to introduce partners to them.
Their relatives, colleagues, friends, classmates would introduce people to them to date.
Their family, colleagues, friends and classmates would introduce people to them to date.
So people didn't have much chance to get to know many opposite sex people, yet they could still get married at the right age and fewer of them got divorced later.
So people didn't have much of a chance to get to know many people of theopposite sex, yet they could still get married at the right age and fewer of them got divorced later.
Nowadays, it is very easy to get to know opposite sex people for young people, since there are so many social apps.
Nowadays, it is very easy to get to know opposite sex people for young people, since the widespread use of social media apps.
Young people can know as many opposite sex people as they want in a day.
However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.
Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.
(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best give birth age is before thirty.) It seems unreasonable and contradictory.
Can anyone tell me why?
Oct. 19, 2023
Thank you very much.
Random Thought
When I was young, people looked for their partners by relying on other people to introduce someone to them.
Their relatives, colleagues, friends, and classmates would introduce people to them to date.
So people didn't have muchany chances to get to know many people of the opposite sex people, yet they could still get married at the right age and fewer of them got divorced later.
As an American, I would write "opposite gender" instead of "opposite sex"
Nowadays, it is very easy for young people to get to know opposite sex people for young people, since there are so many social apps.
Young people can know as many opposite sex people as they want in a day.
However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.
Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.
(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best give birth age is before thirty.) It seems unreasonable and contradictory.
Can anyone tell me why?
Oct. 19, 2023
Thank you very much.
Random Thought
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Young people can knowmeet as many people of the opposite sex people as they want in a day.
However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.
Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.
(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best age to give birth age is before thirty.)
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It seems unreasonable and contradictory.
Can anyone tell me why?
Feedback
interesting! a note is that we don't typically say 'opposite sex people' rather 'people of the opposite sex' or "those of the opposite sex"
good job!
Oct. 19, 2023
Thank you very much.
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