Sept. 14, 2022
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After I retire, I want to choose two coastal counties or county- level cities to live in.
One will be on Hainan island or Leizhou peninsula, and the other will be on Shandong peninsula.
The first two places are in the south part of China, and the last place is in the north part of China. They are all beside the sea.
In addition, the cities that I live in have to be ranked as longevity areas.
Afterwards, I will spend spring and autumn in my hometown, spend winter in the city in the south and spend summer in the city in the north.
Why don't I choose big cities to live in after retirement? Because I am an introvert and I like quiet environmental areas.
Moreover, living in small cities can reduce my living costs.
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After I retire, I want to choose two coastal counties or county- level cities to live in.
This is correct but we don't really say ‘X-level city' in English, this is mostly a Chinese concept, we just say 'big cities' or 'small cities' mostly.
One will be on Hainan island or Leizhou peninsula, and the other will be on Shandong peninsula.
The first two places are in the south part ofSouthern China, and the last place is in the north part ofNorthern China.
They are all beside the sea.
In addition, the cities that I live in have to be ranked as longevity areas.
This also isn't a concept that we have in English either, are you trying to say you want to live in a place that is good for your health?
AfterwardsWhen I am retired, I will spend spring and autumn in my hometown, spend winter in the city in the south and spend summer in the city in the north.
Since you previously said 'after I retire' you can't really use 'afterwards' again, because that is after after you retire, which doesn't make much sense.
Why don't I choose big cities to live in after retirement?
Because I am an introvert and I like quiet environmental areasareas with lots of nature.
MoreoverIn addition, living in small cities can reduce my living costs.
Moreover is quite a formal word
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After I retire, I want to choose two coastal counties or county- level cities to live in. After I retire, I want to choose two coastal counties or county- level cities to live in. This is correct but we don't really say ‘X-level city' in English, this is mostly a Chinese concept, we just say 'big cities' or 'small cities' mostly. |
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One will be on Hainan island or Leizhou peninsula, and the other will be on Shandong peninsula. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The first two places are in the south part of China, and the last place is in the north part of China. The first two places are in |
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They are all beside the sea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In addition, the cities that I live in have to be ranked as longevity areas. In addition, the cities that I live in have to be ranked as longevity areas. This also isn't a concept that we have in English either, are you trying to say you want to live in a place that is good for your health? |
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Afterwards, I will spend spring and autumn in my hometown, spend winter in the city in the south and spend summer in the city in the north.
Since you previously said 'after I retire' you can't really use 'afterwards' again, because that is after after you retire, which doesn't make much sense. |
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Why don't I choose big cities to live in after retirement? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because I am an introvert and I like quiet environmental areas. Because I am an introvert and I like quiet |
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Moreover, living in small cities can reduce my living costs.
Moreover is quite a formal word |
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