Dec. 13, 2021
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Life is really ironic. When we were young, we didn't have much money, but that time was when we were starving of money. When we get old, we probably have a lot of money because of the whole life of savings, but at that age, we already don't need that much money. When we were young, we were full of energy, and we could do many great things, but at that time we could only have lower official positions, and we could hardly be leaders. With aging, we most likely become leaders in old age, but we have already lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before. When we were young, we had plenty of time, but we didn't seem to make good use of it. Most of the time we just hung out and did nothing. When we realize that time is really precious and we should not waste it even just a bit, there is no longer much time for us because we are old already. So the ideal situation should be: young people should be leaders, should get a high salary, and should cherish time.
Life is really ironic.
When we were young, we didn't have much money, but that time was when we were starving ofor money.
When we get old, we probably have a lot of money because of thea whole life of savings, but at that age, we already don't need that much money.
When we were young, we were full of energy, and we could do many great things, but at that time we could only have lower official positions, and we could hardly be leaders.
With aging, we most likely will become leaders in old age, but we have alreadywill have lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before.
When we were young, we had plenty of time, but we didn't seem to make good use of it.
Most of the time we just hung out with friends and did nothing.
When we realize that time is really precious and we should not waste it even just a bit, there is no longer much time for us because we are old already.
So the ideal situation shwould be: young people should be leaders, should get a high salary, and should cherish time.
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Nicely written!
Dec. 14, 2021
Thank you very much for helping me.
When we were young, we didn't have much money, but that time was when we were starvinged of money.
When we get old, we probably have a lots of money because of the whole life of savings, but at that age, we already don't need that much money.
1. No problem here, just sounds a bit smoother in my opinion.
2. You used the word "money" earlier ("lots of money"), so you can drop it at the end.
WBut with aginge, we will most likely become leaders in old age, but we have already lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before.
No need to mention "age" twice.
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Very well written! Cool choice of topic, and I really do agree. Your English is quite superb :D
Dec. 14, 2021
Thank you for your corrections and compliments and I feel really flattered.
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Life is really ironic.
When we were young, we didn't have much money, butactually during that time was when we were starving ofor money.
When we get old, we probably have a lot of money because ofby then whole lifee have a lot of savings, but at that age, we already(actually sounds better) don't need that much money.
When we were young, we were full of energy, and we could do many great things, but at that timethen we could only have lower official positions, and we could hardly be leaders.
With agingAs we fet olders, we most likely become leaders in old age(repetitive), but we have already lost the best time to be leaders because we are no longer as energetic as we were before.
When we realize that time is really precious and we should not waste it even just a bit, there is no longer much time left for us because we are old already.
Dec. 13, 2021
Thank you very much for correcting my text.
Dec. 13, 2021
No worries, I did not have to make major changes. Cheers!
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