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Since I ran out of ideas and have absolutely no idea what to write about, I'll be writing anything that comes to my mind.
After school, I was exhausted; however, I stayed a bit active. I read the novel 'Last Wish', the first book in the series 'The Witcher' , a year ago. One day, I found out that Netflix recently released "The Witcher" as a series. It grabbed my attention to some extent, even though I'm not a huge fan of the series . Also, I felt excited to have listened to the song " Toss a Coin to Your Witcher ". When I listened to it for the first time, it gave me chills. The song was exquisite and it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I’ll watch it someday.
Another thing that came to my mind is how irritating it can be when my nose gets stuffed up every 2-3 hours. I use my handkerchief to wipe the snot away from my leaking nose.
Once, my friend and I happened to both be walking toward the barbershop in my neighborhood . I said " Hi ," and we struck up a long and deep conversation. I remember we'd been talking for hours when it was my turn to have my hair cut. After that, I said farewell and headed back home. I wonder what my friend is doing now. He must be playing games...Who knows?

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Since I ran out of ideas and have absolutely no idea what to write about, I'll be writing anything that comes to my mind.

I read the novel 'Last Wish', the first book in the series 'The Witcher' , a year ago.

It grabbed my attention to some extent, even though I'm not a huge fan of the series .

Also, I felt excited to have listened to the song " Toss a Coin to Your Witcher ".

When I listened to it for the first time, it gave me chills.

The song was exquisite, and it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I’ll watch it someday.

Another thing that came to my mind is how irritating it can be when my nose gets stuffed up every 2-3 hours.

I use my handkerchief to wipe the snot away from my leaking nowse.

Once, my friend and I happened to both be walking toward the barbershop in my neighborhood .

I said " Hi ," and we struck up a long and deep conversation.

I remember we'd been talking for hours when it was my turn to have my hair cut.

After that, I said farewell and headed back home.

I wonder what my friend is doing now.

He must be playing games.

Who knows?

Random stuff

Since I almosthave absolutely don't have anyno idea what to write about, because I ran out of ideas, therefore I'll be writinge anything that comes to (my) mind.

After school, I got exhausted; however, I kept staying a bit activeI was exhausted after school, but I kept myself busy.

A year ago, I read the novel '"Last Wish', a," which is the first part of the book series '"The Witcher' a year ago."

And oOne day, I found out that Netflix released the series of 'The Witcher' latelycently released "The Witcher" as a series.

Well, to some extent, iIt grabbed my attention to some extent even though I'm not a huge fan of 'Tthe Witcher'series.

Using "The Witcher" over and over starts to sound redundant.

Also, I felt excited to have listened to the song '"Toss a cCoin to yYour wWitcher'."

While I wasen I listeninged to it only for the first time, it gave me loads of creepchills.

The song was exquisite, what is more,and it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I' will watch ithe series someday.

Another thing that came to my mind is how irritating it can be when my nose gets stuffed up every 2-3 hours.

I takuse my handkerchief to sweep mywipe the snot away from my leaking nosew.

Once, my friend and I happened to both be walking towards the barbershop in my neighbourhood, well,. I said '"Hi', then," and we struck up a long and deep conversation.

I remember we'd been talking for hours when it was my turn to have my hair cut.

I wonder what my friend is doing now, h. He must be playing games./He must be gaming.

After that, I said farewell and headed back home.

but wWho knows unless I find out.?

Since I almost absolutely don't have any idea what to write about, because I ran out of ideas, therefore I'll be writing anything that comes to my mind.

After school, I gotwas exhausted; however, I kept stayinged a bit active.

I read the novel 'Last Wish', athe first part of the book series 'The Witcher' a year ago.

And one day, I found out that Netflix released the series of 'The Witcher' laterecently.

Well, to some extent, it grabbed my attention even though I'm not a huge fan of 'The Witcher'.

Also, I feltwas excited to have listened to the song 'Toss a coin to your witcher'.

While I was listening to it only for the first time, it gave me loads ofthe creeps.

Is "creeps" what you meant here? You "get the creeps" when something scares or unsettles you. If you think the music is beautiful or awe-inspiring, you might want to say something like "I got chills when listening to it for the first time."

The song was exquisite, w. What is more, it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I'll watch the series someday.

Once, my friend and I happened to be walking towards the barbershop in my neighbourhood, well,. I said 'Hi', then we struck up a long and deep conversation.

The "well" isn't adding anything here, and doesn't really flow. I split this into two sentences instead.

I wonder what my friend is doing now, h. He must be playing games.

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I haven't seen The Witcher, but it looks like a good show!

but who knows unless I found out.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Since I almost absolutely don't have any idea what to write about, because I ran out of ideas, I'll be writing anything that comes to my mind.


After school, I got exhausted; however, I kept staying a bit active.


After school, I gotwas exhausted; however, I kept stayinged a bit active.

After school, I got exhausted; however, I kept staying a bit activeI was exhausted after school, but I kept myself busy.

I read a novel 'Last Wish', a first part of the book series 'The Witcher' a year ago.


And one day, I found out that Netflix released the series of 'The Witcher' lately.


And one day, I found out that Netflix released the series of 'The Witcher' laterecently.

And oOne day, I found out that Netflix released the series of 'The Witcher' latelycently released "The Witcher" as a series.

Well, to some extent, it grabbed my attention even though I'm not a huge fan of 'The Witcher'.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Well, to some extent, iIt grabbed my attention to some extent even though I'm not a huge fan of 'Tthe Witcher'series.

Using "The Witcher" over and over starts to sound redundant.

Also, I felt excited to have listened the song 'Toss a coin to your witcher'.


While I was listening to it only for the first time, it gave me loads of creeps.


While I was listening to it only for the first time, it gave me loads ofthe creeps.

Is "creeps" what you meant here? You "get the creeps" when something scares or unsettles you. If you think the music is beautiful or awe-inspiring, you might want to say something like "I got chills when listening to it for the first time."

While I wasen I listeninged to it only for the first time, it gave me loads of creepchills.

The song was exquisit, what is more, it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I'll watch the series some day.


Another thing that came to my mind is how irritating it can be, when my nose gets stuffed up every 2-3 hours.


I take my handkerchief to sweep my snot away from my leaking nose.


I takuse my handkerchief to sweep mywipe the snot away from my leaking nosew.

Once, my friend and I happened to be walking towards the barbershop in my neighbourhood, well, I said 'Hi' , then we struck up a long and deep conversation.


I remember we'd been talking for hours when it was my turn to have my hair cut.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After that, I said farewell, and headed back home.


I wonder what my friend is doing now, he must be playing games.


I wonder what my friend is doing now, h. He must be playing games.

I wonder what my friend is doing now, h. He must be playing games./He must be gaming.

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I read the novel 'Last Wish', a first part of the book series 'The Witcher' a year ago.


I read the novel 'Last Wish', athe first part of the book series 'The Witcher' a year ago.

A year ago, I read the novel '"Last Wish', a," which is the first part of the book series '"The Witcher' a year ago."

Also, I felt excited to have listened to the song 'Toss a coin to your witcher'.


Also, I feltwas excited to have listened to the song 'Toss a coin to your witcher'.

Also, I felt excited to have listened to the song '"Toss a cCoin to yYour wWitcher'."

The song was exquisite, what is more, it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I'll watch the series someday.


The song was exquisite, w. What is more, it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I'll watch the series someday.

The song was exquisite, what is more,and it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I' will watch ithe series someday.

Another thing that came to my mind is how irritating it can be when my nose gets stuffed up every 2-3 hours.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Once, my friend and I happened to be walking towards the barbershop in my neighbourhood, well, I said 'Hi', then we struck up a long and deep conversation.


Once, my friend and I happened to be walking towards the barbershop in my neighbourhood, well,. I said 'Hi', then we struck up a long and deep conversation.

The "well" isn't adding anything here, and doesn't really flow. I split this into two sentences instead.

Once, my friend and I happened to both be walking towards the barbershop in my neighbourhood, well,. I said '"Hi', then," and we struck up a long and deep conversation.

After that, I said farewell and headed back home.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

but who knows unless I find out.


but wWho knows unless I find out.?

Since I almost absolutely don't have any idea what to write about, because I ran out of ideas, therefore I'll be writing anything that comes to my mind.


Since I almost absolutely don't have any idea what to write about, because I ran out of ideas, therefore I'll be writing anything that comes to my mind.

Since I almosthave absolutely don't have anyno idea what to write about, because I ran out of ideas, therefore I'll be writinge anything that comes to (my) mind.

Since I ran out of ideas and have absolutely no idea what to write about, I'll be writing anything that comes to my mind.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After school, I was exhausted; however, I stayed a bit active.


I read the novel 'Last Wish', the first book in the series 'The Witcher' , a year ago.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One day, I found out that Netflix recently released "The Witcher" as a series.


It grabbed my attention to some extent even though I'm not a huge fan of the series .


It grabbed my attention to some extent, even though I'm not a huge fan of the series .

Also, I felt excited to have listened to the song " Toss a Coin to Your Witcher ".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I listened to it for the first time, it gave me chills.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The song was exquisite, and it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I’ll watch it someday.


The song was exquisite, and it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I’ll watch it someday.

I use my handkerchief to wipe the snot away from my leaking now.


I use my handkerchief to wipe the snot away from my leaking nowse.

Once, my friend and I happened to both be walking toward the barbershop in my neighborhood .


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I said " Hi ," and we struck up a long and deep conversation.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wonder what my friend is doing now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He must be playing games.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Who knows?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It grabbed my attention to some extent, even though I'm not a huge fan of the series .


The song was exquisite and it prompted me to start watching the full series, so I guess I’ll watch it someday.


I use my handkerchief to wipe the snot away from my leaking nose.


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