March 7, 2023
As I am still practicing grammar in my writing, I will continue to use different tenses and conditionals in this post.However, this time I’ll practise randomly since I want to figure out which things I’ve learned.
When I was a child, I often visited the local library in my town. Unlike many suburban libraries, there were books for any taste and age, from encyclopedias to children's books. I was always walking for hours among long rows of shelves, amazed by the abundance of books waiting to be discovered. More often than not, I couldn’t make a choice about what I wanted to read. While I poked around among old volumes and magazines, the librarian was usually making coffee or reading some book, so we didn’t interfere with each other. She was a middle-aged woman with a quiet voice, who was always wearing old-fashioned clothes that somehow didn’t look out of place on her. In the evening, after finishing work, she shut the door and left the library, returning the next morning at the same time.
For me, this woman was always a paragon of the avid reader, giving up many things in her life for the sake of her strongest passion, reading. She didn't have a husband or children, and I never saw her with a man. Sometimes, though, she brought her cat to the library. It was a big, fluffy animal with suspicious eyes and massive paws, always ready to pounce or attack. After discovering the cat at the library for the first time, I was afraid of her biting me for quite a long time but since she got used to me we got on like a house on fire.
I’d never had a pet before I met this cat, so it was quite a surprise when we liked each other. Since I had a brother, a pet in my family was out of the question. My parents were fairly tired of two restless adolescents turning everything upside down, so if we had adopted a pet, it would have become too noisy at home. I had already been in my 20s when my parents finally decided to adopt a dog, surprised as much as me by their sudden decision. They had been hesitating for months before they finally got the dog at home. Even though this dog brought a lot of joy to their lives, it was also quite a stress for them.
As I am still practising grammar in my writing, I will continue to use different tenses and conditionals in this post. However, I’ll practise randomly this time since I want to figure out which things I’ve learned.
When I was a child, I often visited the local library in my town. Unlike many suburban libraries, there were books for any taste and age, from encyclopedias to children's books. I was always walking for hours among the long rows of shelves, amazed by the abundance of books waiting to be discovered. More often than not, I couldn’t make a choice about what I wanted to read. While I poked around among old volumes and magazines, the librarian was usually making coffee or reading a book, so we didn’t bother each other. She was a middle-aged woman with a quiet voice, who was always wearing old-fashioned clothes that somehow didn’t look out of place on her. In the evening, after finishing work, she shut the door and left the library, and would return the next morning at the same time.
For me, this woman was always a paragon of the avid reader, giving up many things in her life for the sake of her strongest passion, reading. She didn't have a husband or children, and I never saw her with a man. Sometimes, though, she brought her cat to the library. It was a big and fluffy, with suspicious eyes and massive paws, always ready to pounce or attack. After discovering the cat at the library for the first time, I was afraid of her biting me for quite a long time. But once she got used to me, we got on like a house on fire.
I’d never had a pet before I met this cat, so it was quite a surprise when we liked each other. Since I had a brother, a pet in the family was out of the question. My parents were fairly tired of two restless adolescents turning everything upside down, so if we had adopted a pet, it would have become too noisy at home. I was already in my 20s when my parents finally decided to adopt a dog, surprised as I was by their sudden decision. They had been hesitating for months before they finally got the dog. Even though this dog brought a lot of joy to their lives, it was also quite a source of stress for them.
Random Practisce
As I am still practicsing grammar in my writing, I will continue to use different tenses and conditionals in this post. However, this time I’ll practise randomly since I want to figure out which things I’ve learned.
When I was a child, I often visited the local library in my town.
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While I poked around among old volumes and magazines, the librarian was usually making coffee or reading some book, so we didn’t interfere with each other.
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Random Practisce
This is how we spell "practice" in the US.
As I am still practicing grammar in my writing, I will continue to use different tenses and conditionals in this post.However, this time This time, however, I’ll practisce randomly since I want to figure out which things I’ve learned.
When I was a child, I often visited the local library in my town.
"Local" and "in my town" are redundant.
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When I was a child, I often visited the library in my town.
Unlike many suburban libraries, there were books for any taste and age, from encyclopedias to children's books.
I was always walkinged for hours among the long rows of bookshelves, amazed by the abundance of books waiting to be discovered.
More often than not, I couldn’t make a choice about what I wanted to read.
While I poked around among old volumes and magazines, the librarian was usually making coffee or reading somea book, so we didn’t interfere withbother each other.
She was a middle-aged woman with a quiet voice, who was always wearing old-fashioned clothes that somehow didn’t look out of place on her.
In the evening, after finishing work, she shut the door and left the library, returning the next morning at the same time.
For me, this woman was always a paragon of the avid reader, giving up many things in her life for the sake of her strongest passion, reading.
She didn't have a husband or children, and I never saw her with a man.
Sometimes, though, she brought her cat to the library.
It was a big, fluffy animal with suspicioushifty eyes and massive paws, always ready to pounce or attack.
After discovering the cat at the library for the first time, I was afraid of her biting me for quite a long time but since she got used to me we got on like a house on fireand then we got along very well.
The idiom "house on fire" sounds strange to me in this context.
I’d never had a pet before I met this cat, so it was quite a surprise when I realized that we liked each other.
Since I had a brother, a pet in my family was out of the question.
My parents were fairly tired of two restless adolescents turning everything upside down, so, if we had adopted a pet, it would have become too noisychaotic at home.
I hadwas already been in my 20s when my parents finally decided to adopt a dog, which surprised them as much as me by their sudden decision.
They had been hesitating for months before they finally got the dog at home.
Even though this dog brought a lot of joy to their lives, it was also quite a stressful for them.
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Even though this dog brought a lot of joy to their lives, it was also quite a source of stress for them.
As I am still practicsing grammar in my writing, I will continue to use different tenses and conditionals in this post. However, this time I’ll practise randomly this time since I want to figure out which things I’ve learned.
I was always walkinged for hours among the long rows of shelves, amazed by the abundance of books waiting to be discovered.
More often than not, I couldn’t make a choice about what I wanted to read.
This reads really well - like a native sentence :)
While I poked around among old volumes and magazines, the librarian was usually making coffee or reading somea book, so we didn’t interfere withbother each other.
She was a middle-aged woman with a quiet voice, who was always wearingore old-fashioned clothes that somehow didn’t look out of place on her.
"was always wearing" works too, but I'd expect that more in speech than in writing
In the evening, after finishing work, she shut the door and left the library, and would returning the next morning at the same time.
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They had been hesitating for months before they finally got the dog at home.
Even though this dog brought a lot of joy to their lives, it was also quite a source of stress for them.
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Excellent work! This was really well written.
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