Oct. 4, 2020
Ramen Noodle
Today, I ate ramen for my dinner. I think Japanese fast foods are Ramen, Gyudon, and Udon or Soba. I would like to write about Ramen now.
Ramen has a lot of variety, for example, Shio(salt), Miso, Iekei, Jiroukei, etc. The most popular type is the Shoyu. Most of the Ramen consists of noodles, soup, and toppings. Toppings are usually seaweed, boiled egg, or bamboo shoots. You can also add toppings like cheese or garlic. However, the most important topping is roasted pork fillet because the cooks of Ramen tend to take it seriously.
The Ramen I ate tonight was a Sprout Ramen. This is a special menu for students and cheap but delicious. Besides, you can eat rice without any restriction if you select the menu. I usually eat Ramen with rice. Soups of Ramen is rich and salty, so these match rice and roasted pork fillets are the best side dish for rice. I become hungry when writing about Ramen.
Today, I ate ramen for my dinner.
Ramen has a lot of variety, f. For example, Shio(salt), Miso, Iekei, Jiroukei, etc.
The most popular type is the Shoyu.
Most of the Ramen consists of noodles, soup, and toppings.
Toppings are usually seaweed, boiled eggs, or bamboo shoots.
However, the most important topping is the roasted pork fillet because the cooks of Ramen tend to take it seriously.
This is a special menu for students and it is cheap but delicious.
Soups of RamenThe soup is rich and salty, so ithese match rice andes the rice. The roasted pork fillets are the best side dish for rice.
Ramen Noodles
Today, I ate ramen for my dinner.
I think typical Japanese fast foods are Ramen, Gyudon, and Udon orand Soba.
I would like to write about Ramen now.
エセーとかを書いているときに、「〇〇いついて話そうと思います」という表現は英語であまり使いません。もっと強い表現の方が使います。もちろん、これは人によって違いますが、「will」を使うの方が多いです。
Ramen has a lot of variety, fies. For example, Shio (salt), Miso, Iekei, Jiroukei, etc.
The most popular type is the Shoyu.
Most of the Ramen consists of noodles, soup, and toppings.
The toppings are usually seaweed, boiled egg, or bamboo shoots.
You can also add toppings like cheese or garlic.
However, the most important topping is roasted pork fillet because the cooks of RamenRamen chefs tend to take it seriously.
日本人がよく間違いているのは「〇〇の〇〇」と思います。（私は日本で英語を教えていますから、この間違えはよく聞きます！）
The Ramen I ate tonight was a Sprout Ramen.
This is a special menu item for students andwhich is cheap but delicious.
Besides, you can eat rice without any restriction if you select the menuunlimited rice if you order this dish.
Unlimited = この文書の倍、「食べ放題」ってこと
Menu = あの店のメニュー（全部の食事とか。献立や品書き）
前の文書で「menu item」が書いてあって、「item」が入っているから一品についてが分かれるね。
I usually eat Ramen with rice.
Soups of Ramen soup is rich and salty, so these match rice and rit goes well with rice. Roasted pork fillets are the best side dish for rice.
I becomeget hungry when writing about Ramen.
英語で「〇〇くなります」のもっとナチュラルな表現は「get〇〇」です。
貰うの「get」と違います。
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You did so well! I can clearly understand what you are trying to say, just work on using more natural expressions and you'll be fine! Your English is fantastic! :)
私はまだ日本語を勉強中ですので、変な日本語を許してください。
Oct. 5, 2020
丁寧な添削ありがとうございます！とてもわかりやすい解説でしたよ。
Today, I ate ramen for my dinner.
I would like toill write about Ramen now.
Ramen has a lot of variety, for example, Shio(salt), Miso, Iekei, Jiroukei, etc.
The most popular type is the Shoyu.
Most of the Ramen consists of noodles, soup, and toppings.
Toppings used are usually seaweed, boiled eggs, or bamboo shoots.
You can also add toppings like cheese or garlic.
However, the most important topping is roasted pork fillet because the cooks of Ramenhefs tend to take it seriously.
The Ramen I ate tonight was a Sprout Ramen.
This is a special menu for students andbecause it is cheap but delicious.
Besides, you can eat rice without any restrictions if you select the menu.
I usually eat Ramen with rice.
Soups of Ramen soup is rich and salty, so these match rice andit matches with the rice. The roasted pork fillets are the best side dish for the rice.
I have become hungry when writing about Ramen.
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Toppings are usually seaweed, boiled egg, or bamboo shoots. Toppings used are usually seaweed, boiled eggs, or bamboo shoots. The toppings are usually seaweed, boiled egg, or bamboo shoots. Toppings are usually seaweed, boiled eggs, or bamboo shoots. |
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I think Japanese fast foods are Ramen, Gyudon, and Udon or Soba. I think typical Japanese fast foods are Ramen, Gyudon, |
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I would like to write about Ramen now. I w I would like to write about Ramen now. エセーとかを書いているときに、「〇〇いついて話そうと思います」という表現は英語であまり使いません。もっと強い表現の方が使います。もちろん、これは人によって違いますが、「will」を使うの方が多いです。 |
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However, the most important topping is roasted pork fillet because the cooks of Ramen tend to take it seriously. However, the most important topping is roasted pork fillet because the c However, the most important topping is roasted pork fillet because the 日本人がよく間違いているのは「〇〇の〇〇」と思います。（私は日本で英語を教えていますから、この間違えはよく聞きます！） However, the most important topping is the roasted pork fillet because the cooks of Ramen tend to take it seriously. |
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The Ramen I ate tonight was a Sprout Ramen. The Ramen I ate tonight was The Ramen I ate tonight was |
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This is a special menu for students and cheap but delicious. This is a special menu item for students This is a special menu for students This is a special menu for students and it is cheap but delicious. |
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Besides, you can eat rice without any restriction if you select the menu. Besides, you can eat rice without any restrictions if you select the menu. Besides, you can eat Unlimited = この文書の倍、「食べ放題」ってこと Menu = あの店のメニュー（全部の食事とか。献立や品書き） 前の文書で「menu item」が書いてあって、「item」が入っているから一品についてが分かれるね。 |
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I usually eat Ramen with rice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Soups of Ramen is rich and salty, so these match rice and roasted pork fillets are the best side dish for rice.
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I become hungry when writing about Ramen. I have become hungry when writing about Ramen. I 英語で「〇〇くなります」のもっとナチュラルな表現は「get〇〇」です。 貰うの「get」と違います。 |
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