Nov. 5, 2024
Rakugan, A Traditional Japanese Sweet 落雁（らくがん）
Rakugan, I believe, is a traditional Japanese sweet. It’s been around since I was a child.
I don’t eat it often, but its refined sweetness, melting delicately in my mouth, is irresistible. It has a very elegant flavor.
Rakugan is made by mixing flour from grains with sugar and other ingredients, kneading it, pressing it into wooden molds, and then drying it.
I’ve never made it by myself though.
Rakugan has quite a long shelf life.
「落雁（らくがん）」とは、日本の伝統的なお菓子だと思います。ぼくが小さい時からありますから。普段はあまり口にしません。
口の中でとろけるような品のよい甘さがたまりません。とても上品な味わいです。
落雁とは、穀類の粉に砂糖などを入れて練り、木型に押して乾燥させたお菓子です。作ったことはありませんが。落雁は結構日持ちしますよ。
Rakugan, A Ta traditional Japanese Ssweet 落雁（らくがん）
Rakugan, I believe, is a traditional Japanese sweet.
It’s been around since I was a child.
I don’t eat it often, but its refined sweetness, melting delicately in my mouth, is irresistible.
It has a very elegant flavor.
Rakugan is made by mixing flour from grains with sugar and other ingredients, kneading it, pressing it into wooden molds, and then drying it.
I’ve never made it by myself though.
Rakugan has quite a long shelf life.
Rakugan, A Traditional Japanese Sweet 落雁（らくがん）
Rakugan, I believe, is a traditional Japanese sweet.
It’s been around since I was a child.
I don’t eat it often, but its refined sweetness, melting delicately in my mouth, is irresistible.
This sentence is perfect grammar! But it sounds a bit.. erotic, maybe.
"I don't eat it often, but it has a subtle sweetness and melts in your mouth."
It has a very elegant flavor.
Rakugan is made by mixing flour from grains with sugar and other ingredients, kneading it, pressing it into wooden molds, and then drying it.
I’ve never made it by myself, though.
Rakugan has quite a long shelf life.
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Nov. 6, 2024
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Rakugan, I believe, is a traditional Japanese sweet.
It’s been around since I was a child.
I don’t eat it often, but its refined sweetness, melting delicately in my mouth, is irresistible.
It has a very elegant flavor.
Rakugan is made by mixing flour from grains with sugar and other ingredients, kneading it, pressing it into wooden molds, and then drying it.
I’ve never made it by myself though.
Rakugan has quite a long shelf life.
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Well done! I should try rakugan whenever I get the chance, it seems tasty. I hope you get the chance one day to make it yourself, might be something to try at least once. Once again, great job! Not much to correct.
Nov. 6, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
Rakugan, A Traditional Japanese Sweet 落雁（らくがん）
Rakugan, I believe, is a traditional Japanese sweet.
It’s been around since I was a child.
I don’t eat it often, but its refined sweetness, melting delicately in my mouth, is irresistible.
It has a very elegant flavor.
I am not sure that elegant would be used to describe flavor, it is more for clothing, style, personality. Perhaps, subtle flavour or refined?
Rakugan is made by mixing flour from grains with sugar and other ingredients, kneading it, pressing it into wooden molds, and then drying it.
flour is made from grains and we just say flour. If you wanted to specify what kind of flour you could, like rye flour, oat flour, etc.
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Very good work! The writing is at a very high level, not much to correct at all. :)
Nov. 6, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and comment.
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