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Jack

Sept. 16, 2025

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Raising Chickens

When I was a child, people in my village started raising chickens in spring.

In my area, there were a few chicken hatcheries every spring. When the baby chickens grew up to marketable age, they sold the chickens to nearby families on credit.

When people bought the baby chickens, they fed the chickens with grains and their leftover meals.

They didn't have a special place for raising the chickens; instead, their chickens could run anywhere in the village. Thus, chickens in the village needed to be dyed with different colors on different parts of the chickens' bodies to tell whose chickens they were.

Usually, each family would have a chicken coop, but when the chickens grew up, they liked to fly to trees at night and sleep there.

Raising chickens was not easy. People needed to vaccinate the chickens several times when they were young. In addition, people needed to pay much attention to preventing yellow weasels, which were natural enemies of chickens.

If the chickens unfortunately got fowl plague, they would die very quickly. The symptoms of fowl plague were a runny nose, fever, and lethargy.

Chickens could be eaten around October. By then they weighed about 0.5 kilograms. It was the time when their meat was tender and fragrant.

We only ate chickens when our relatives visited us because of poor living conditions. We never ate a chicken by ourselves.

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Raising Chickens

When I was a child, people in my village would started raising chickens in spring.

started raising chickens = they only did it once
would start raising chickens = they did it every spring

In my area, there were a few chicken hatcheries operating every spring.

When the baby chickens grew up to marketable age, they sold the chickens to nearby families on credit.

When people bought the baby chickens, they fed the chickens with grains and their leftover meals.

They didn't have a special place for raising the chickens; instead, their chickens could run anywhere in the village.

Thus, chickens in the village needed to be dyed with different colors on different parts of the chickens' bodies to tell whose chickens they were.

Usually, each family would have a chicken coop, but when the chickens grew up, they liked to fly into trees at night and sleep there.

Raising chickens was not easy.

People needed to vaccinate the chickens several times when they were young.

In addition, people needed to pay much attention to preventing yellow weasels, which wereare a natural enemiesy of chickens.

If the chickens unfortunately got fowl plaguebird flu, they would die very quickly.

Apparently fowl plague is an old word for bird flu and not really used any more.

The symptoms of fowl plague webird flu are a runny nose, fever, and lethargy.

Chickens could be eaten around October.

By then they weighed about 0.5 kilograms.

IThat was the time when their meat was tender and fragrant.

We only ate chickens when our relatives visited us because of poor living conditionswe were poor.

We never ate a chicken by ourselves.

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Jack

Sept. 17, 2025

6

Thank you very much.

Raising Chickens


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When I was a child, people in my village started raising chickens in spring.


When I was a child, people in my village would started raising chickens in spring.

started raising chickens = they only did it once would start raising chickens = they did it every spring

In my area, there were a few chicken hatcheries every spring.


In my area, there were a few chicken hatcheries operating every spring.

When the baby chickens grew up to marketable age, they sold the chickens to nearby families on credit.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When people bought the baby chickens, they fed the chickens with grains and their leftover meals.


When people bought the baby chickens, they fed the chickens with grains and their leftover meals.

They didn't have a special place for raising the chickens; instead, their chickens could run anywhere in the village.


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Thus, chickens in the village needed to be dyed with different colors on different parts of the chickens' bodies to tell whose chickens they were.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Usually, each family would have a chicken coop, but when the chickens grew up, they liked to fly to trees at night and sleep there.


Usually, each family would have a chicken coop, but when the chickens grew up, they liked to fly into trees at night and sleep there.

Raising chickens was not easy.


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People needed to vaccinate the chickens several times when they were young.


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Chickens could be eaten around October.


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By then they weighed about 0.5 kilograms.


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It was the time when their meat was tender and fragrant.


IThat was the time when their meat was tender and fragrant.

We only ate chickens when our relatives visited us because of poor living conditions.


We only ate chickens when our relatives visited us because of poor living conditionswe were poor.

We never ate a chicken by ourselves.


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In addition, people needed to pay much attention to preventing yellow weasels, which were natural enemies of chickens.


In addition, people needed to pay much attention to preventing yellow weasels, which wereare a natural enemiesy of chickens.

If the chickens unfortunately got fowl plague, they would die very quickly.


If the chickens unfortunately got fowl plaguebird flu, they would die very quickly.

Apparently fowl plague is an old word for bird flu and not really used any more.

The symptoms of fowl plague were a runny nose, fever, and lethargy.


The symptoms of fowl plague webird flu are a runny nose, fever, and lethargy.

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