Aug. 13, 2021
Rainy Day again
It has been raining all day. I had nothing to do, so I went for a workout this afternoon. After I got home, the local library sent me an e-mail. I can borrow the book I reserved, but it is raining heavily, so I hesitate to go out now.
今日も一日雨でした。することがないので、午後はウェイトトレーニングをするために出かけました。家に帰ったら、地元の図書館からメールが来ました。予約していた本の用意ができたみたいですが、雨が強くて、今出かけるのを躊躇しています。
Rainy Day again
It has been raining all day.
I had nothing to do, so I went for a workout this afternoon.
After I got home, the local library sent me an e-mail.
I can borrow the book I reserved, but it is raining heavily, so I'm hesitante to go out now.
Because we are talking about a potential action rather than an active action, we use the potential form of hesitate 'hesitant'
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Makeevolutions corrections are formal English to me, and the majority of this sounds acceptable to me as casual English. This could be a case of difference between American and British English, as American English is over-all less precise.
Aug. 13, 2021
Thank you!
It hasd been raining all day.
I canould borrow the book I reserved, but it iswas still raining heavily, so I still hesitated to go out now.
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Careful of tenses
Aug. 13, 2021
Thank you!
Aug. 14, 2021
It hasd been raining all day.
If it's still raining, "has been" is perfectly fine.
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