July 2, 2025
Rainy day.
Rainy season is one of my favourite season. To be honest, I enjoys the most when its rainy outside. The first smell of wet mud feels so good. When it starts raining suddenly everybody runs here and there to avoid it to not become wet. This rainy days remind me of my father, he used to pickup me from school when I was a little kid. Me with younger brother used to intentionally ride our bicycles from muddy places . Our mom doesn't like that thing because it makes our clothes too dirty. These rains are a blessing from God, through rain the farmers yields produces foods to eat. For me it reminds me my lost childhood memories.
Rainy dDay.
Since this is the title, it does not need a period and follows title capitalization rules
RThe rainy season is one of my favourite seasons.
To be honest, I enjoys the mostprefer when it's rainy outside.
It's = contraction of it is
Its = possessive form of "it," for example, "The tree and its leaves"
The first smellcent of wet mud feesmells so good.
There are two possibilities here. One: you are talking about the smell of the mud. Two: you are talking about the feeling of mud, for example the feeling you would have if you walked in the mud. I wrote for option one, but if you wanted option two, it could be written as, "The first formation of wet mud feels so good."
When it starts raining, suddenly everybody runs here and there to avoid it, to not become wet.
Thisese rainy days remind me of my father, he used to pickup me up from school when I was a little kid.
Me withy younger brother and I used to intentionally ride our bicycles fromin muddy places .
With this sentence structure, you have to write "I" and not "me." The reason why is that it needs to be grammatically correct with the complement "used to." Since you cannot say "Me used to," you need to rewrite the sentence for "I used to."
Our mom doesn't like that thing because it makes our clothes too dirty.
These rains are a blessing from God,; through rain the farmers yields produces foods to eat.
For me, it reminds me of my lost childhood memories.
Feedback
Good job. I love the rain too!
July 3, 2025
Thank you for your valuable feedback. Can you suggest me effective and practical ways to improve my language, I mean I want to improve writing, speaking, reading and listening.
July 3, 2025
Already, what you are doing here to practice writing is a great activity. Reading is simple enough - find content (such as articles or books) and read. For listening, you could watch TV shows in English with captions on, and/or find YouTube content targeted for English learners. Speaking is more complicated. There is one application I know of, Busuu, that has some limited speaking exercises. The alternative is to find either a partner to speak with or classes you can take, either in-person or online. I suggest that when you do reading practices, you read out-loud so that you are also practicing your speaking (you just will not have someone there to correct you).
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Rainy day. Rainy Since this is the title, it does not need a period and follows title capitalization rules |
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These rains are a blessing from God, through rain the farmers yields produces foods to eat. These rains are a blessing from God |
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For me it reminds me my lost childhood memories. For me, it reminds me of my lost childhood memories. |
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Rainy season is one of my favourite season.
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To be honest, I enjoys the most when its rainy outside. To be honest, I It's = contraction of it is Its = possessive form of "it," for example, "The tree and its leaves" |
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The first smell of wet mud feels so good. The first s There are two possibilities here. One: you are talking about the smell of the mud. Two: you are talking about the feeling of mud, for example the feeling you would have if you walked in the mud. I wrote for option one, but if you wanted option two, it could be written as, "The first formation of wet mud feels so good." |
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When it starts raining suddenly everybody runs here and there to avoid it to not become wet. When it starts raining, suddenly everybody runs here and there to avoid it, to not become wet. |
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This rainy days remind me of my father, he used to pickup me from school when I was a little kid. Th |
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Me with younger brother used to intentionally ride our bicycles from muddy places . M With this sentence structure, you have to write "I" and not "me." The reason why is that it needs to be grammatically correct with the complement "used to." Since you cannot say "Me used to," you need to rewrite the sentence for "I used to." |
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Our mom doesn't like that thing because it makes our clothes too dirty. Our mom doesn't like that |
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