Feb. 9, 2022
Rainy day
Firstly, I love a rainy day when I don't have to go anywhere) I would like to stay in my bed and watch my favorite YouTube channels while eating banana chips. I really like it! It will be great if I can spend time with my husband or if he is busy with my family and friends, chatting about different topics. Also, I think I would like to cook something warm for my family, maybe a chicken in the oven or some soup..
Firstly, II would love a rainy day when I don't have to go anywhere). I would like to stay in my bed and watch my favorite YouTube channels while eating banana chips.
I would really like it!a day like this.
It willould be great if I canould spend time with my husband, or if he is busy, with my family and friends, and chatting about different topics.
Also, I think I would like to cook something warm for my family, maybe roast a chicken in the oven or make some soup..
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Most of your sentences sound hypothetical, as in, what you would do if you could have an ideal rainy day indoors, so that's why I made a lot of changes.
Rainy day
Firstly, I love a rainy day when I don't have to go anywhere). I would like to stay in my bed and watch my favorite YouTube channels while eating banana chips.
I really like ithem!
You are referring to "rainy days" which is a plural phrase.
It willould be great if I canould spend time with my husband or if he is busy, with my family and friends, chatting about different topics.
"Would" instead of "will", because we are talking about hypothetical rainy days.
Also, I think I would like to cook something warm for my family, maybe a chicken in the oven or some soup..
Rainy day
Firstly, I love a rainy day when I don't have to go anywhere), ideally I would like to stay in my bed and watch my favorite YouTube channels while eating banana chips.
"Firstly" isn't necessarily a mistake, however it usually implies a "Secondly".
I really like it!
It willould be great if I canould spend time with my husband or if he is busy with my family and friends, chatting about different topics.
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Nice, well done :)
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Firstly, I love a rainy day when I don't have to go anywhere) I would like to stay in my bed and watch my favorite YouTube channels while eating banana chips.
"Firstly" isn't necessarily a mistake, however it usually implies a "Secondly". First
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