Aug. 25, 2022
Rains In Summer Are Beautiful
I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninstorms. After the rain, plants are greener than ever and its leafs shine in pretty green and yellow tones. Rain refresh the summer like an ice cream. When the day is cloudy you can walk in the street without too much heat. A lot o people relate a cloudy day to sadness but I think that rain is more related to nostalgy.
Haiku:
After the rainstorm
shining with the summer sunlight
plants become greener
Rains In Summer Are Beautiful
I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninthe storms.
After the rain, plants are greener than ever and its leafs shine in pretty green and yellow tones.
Rain refreshes the summerair/the earth like an ice cream.
When the day is cloudy you can walk in the street without too much heat.
A lot of people relate a cloudy day to sadness but I think that rain is more closely related to nostalgyia.
Haiku:
After the rainstorm
shining with the summer sunlight
plants become greener
Rains I in Summer Areis Beautiful
I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninstorms.
After the rain, the plants (are/return) greener than ever and itstheir leafves shine in pretty green and yellow tones.
Really lovely sentence here! Just a stylistic suggestion.
Rain refreshes the summer like, just ans ice cream does.
When the day is cloudy, you can walk in the street without too much heat.
A lot of people relate a cloudy day to sadness, but I think that rain is more related to nostalgyia.
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Great work! I love your entries, including the haikus!
Aug. 26, 2022
Thank you so much!! Thanks for the compliment :'')
Rains I in Summer Areis Beautiful
I understand how figuring out which words should be capitalized can be difficult. Hang in there!
I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninstorms.
I do, too!
I wasn't sure what you meant by, "raninstorms," so I deleted it.
After the rain, plants are greener than ever and itsthe leafves shine in pretty green and yellow tones.
This is a beautiful sentence!
Rain refresh thes summer like an ice cream does.
When the day is cloudy, you can walk inalong the streets without too much heafeeling too hot.
A lot of people relatethink a cloudy day is related to sadness but I think that rain is more related to nostalgyia.
What a terrific observation!
Haiku:
After the rainstorm
shining with the summer sunlight
plants become greener
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Very well done! I love this!
Aug. 26, 2022
Thank you so much!!, I'm glad you like it :')
Rains In Summer Are Beautiful
It is poetic as written, but the more common phrasing would be "Rain in the Summer is Beautiful".
I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninthunderstorms.
'Rainstorm' would work too.
After the rain, plants are greener than ever and itstheir leafves shine in pretty green and yellow tones.
Plural, to match plant_s_.
Rain refreshes the summer like an ice cream.
Ice cream is usually uncountable, e.g:
I had lots of ice cream.
The store offers many kinds of ice cream.
How much ice cream did you buy?
When the day is cloudy you can walk in the street without too much heat.
A lot of people (relate/compare) a cloudy day to sadness, but I think that rain is more related to nostalgyia.
Haiku:
After the rainstorm
shining with the summer sunlight
plants become greener
Feedback
That is a very nice haiku! :)
Aug. 26, 2022
Thank you!!! Your corrections are so helpul
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