Nov. 18, 2020
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Today it's pouring outside. It was somewhat hot earlier, so I even put my swimsuit on. Now I feel ridiculous. In spite of that, I love rainy days. When the weather is rainy, I enjoy having a cup of coffee while watching something on Netflix. I usually like having a blanket with me, but today is not cold enough. It's 24 degrees Celsius, which is not much, but the humidity makes it worse. There's nothing but hatred in my soul towards hot weather.
I was thinking of sunbathing a little before it rained (I had no idea it would), as my mum worries about me not getting enough vitamin D if I don't. I get her point because I haven't gotten out of the house for months, and that can't be healthy.
However, since the rain ruined my plan, I'll have a cup of coffee while watching Harry Potter.
I was wondering if there are any phrases or expressions to denote hatred apart from saying "I hate this".
Rain
Today iIt's pouring outside.
This sentence feels a little unnatural to me. I think part of it is because "it's pouring outside" is usually something you say in regard to the weather at that instant, and "today" implies that it has been pouring all day.
Some ways I would say this instead are:
It's pouring outside.
Today it poured.
It has been pouring/raining all day.
Since it was not pouring earlier and the day was not yet over when you wrote this, I corrected it to the first suggestion.
It was somewhat hot earlier, so I even put my swimsuit on.
Not changing this because technically I don't see any problems, I just wouldn't say it this way myself. In my opinion, a more natural way to say this would be "It was somewhat hot earlier, so much so that I put my swimsuit on" or simply "It was so hot earlier that I put my swimsuit on"
The way you wrote it might feel natural to other users though-- I'm interested to see what they think.
Now I feel ridiculous.
In spite of that, I love rainy days.
When the weather is rainy, I enjoy having a cup of coffee while watching something on Netflix.
I usually like having a blanket with me, but today is not cold enough (for that).
It's 24 degrees Celsius, which is not much, but the humidity makes it worse.
You could also say: It's 24 degrees Celsius, which is not bad, but the humidity makes it worse.
There's nothing but hatred in my soul towards hot weather.
I was thinking of sunbathing a little before it rained (I had no idea it would), as my mum worries about me not getting enough vitamin D if I don't.
I get her point because I haven't gotten out of the house for months, and that can't be healthy.
However, since the rain ruined my plan, I'll have a cup of coffee while watching Harry Potter.
I was wondering if there are any phrases or expressions to denote hatred apart from saying "I hate this".
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Great writing! Watching Harry Potter in the rain sounds so cozy :)
Nov. 19, 2020
A more "casual" way to express hatred is by saying "This is the worst" or "it's literally the worst"
It is the kind of thing that makes you sound young (I feel like a professional business person wouldn't say it) but I say it to my friends all the time when we are complaining about something.
Nov. 19, 2020
Thank you so much! Now you've mentioned it, "It was somewhat hot earlier, so much so that I put my swimsuit on" sounds much better.
Rain
Today it's pouring outside.
Generally when introducing a topic into a conversation, you mention the object. While this sentence is correct, it would sound more natural to say, "it's pouring rain outside", as there wan't any conversation or such on the weather beforehand.
It was somewhat hot earlier, so I even put my swimsuit on.
Now I feel ridiculous.
In spite of that, I love rainy days.
When the weather is rainy, I enjoy having a cup of coffee while watching something on Netflix.
I usually like having a blanket with me, but today it's not cold enough.
It's 24 degrees Celsius, which is not muchn't really that hot, but the humidity makes it worse.
There's nothing but hatred in my soul towards hot weather.
I was thinking of sunbathing a little before it rained (I had no idea it would), as my mum worries about me not getting enough vitamin D if I don't.
I get her point because I haven't gotten out of the house for months, and that can't be healthy.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections! For your last question at the bottom, there are a few other ways to denote hatred, including but not limited to...
I loathe this
I abhor this
I detest this
As well as rearranging it as...
this is something I hate
this is something I abhor
this is something I loathe
this is something I detest
I hope that this answered your question!
Nov. 18, 2020
Thank you so much!
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Today it's pouring outside. Today it's pouring outside. Generally when introducing a topic into a conversation, you mention the object. While this sentence is correct, it would sound more natural to say, "it's pouring rain outside", as there wan't any conversation or such on the weather beforehand.
This sentence feels a little unnatural to me. I think part of it is because "it's pouring outside" is usually something you say in regard to the weather at that instant, and "today" implies that it has been pouring all day. Some ways I would say this instead are: It's pouring outside. Today it poured. It has been pouring/raining all day. Since it was not pouring earlier and the day was not yet over when you wrote this, I corrected it to the first suggestion. |
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It was somewhat hot earlier, so I even put my swimsuit on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It was somewhat hot earlier, so I even put my swimsuit on. Not changing this because technically I don't see any problems, I just wouldn't say it this way myself. In my opinion, a more natural way to say this would be "It was somewhat hot earlier, so much so that I put my swimsuit on" or simply "It was so hot earlier that I put my swimsuit on" The way you wrote it might feel natural to other users though-- I'm interested to see what they think. |
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I usually like having a blanket with me, but today is not cold enough. I usually like having a blanket with me, but today it's not cold enough. I usually like having a blanket with me, but today is not cold enough (for that). |
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It's 24 degrees Celsius, which is not much, but the humidity makes it worse. It's 24 degrees Celsius, which is It's 24 degrees Celsius, which is not much, but the humidity makes it worse. You could also say: It's 24 degrees Celsius, which is not bad, but the humidity makes it worse. |
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There's nothing but hatred in my soul towards hot weather. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was thinking of sunbathing a little before it rained (I had no idea it would), as my mum worries about me not getting enough vitamin D if I don't. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I get her point because I haven't gotten out of the house for months, and that can't be healthy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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