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Today I would like to write about a topic I like a lot. Probably, most of the people who will read this doesn't know too much about races (of cars), or doesn't really care about, but is quite an interesting topic, in races overtakes aren't the only exiting thing, there are strategy, tyre wear, could be disagreements between 2 drivers of the same team, crashes and a lot more. But being honest, to enjoy a race there must be a driver of your country on the grid or you really enjoy to compare statistics, laps and probability, so you should find the way to enjoy a race on that most of the time there are drivers that aproche to each other but they never really fight on track, and that way is by enjoying to compare and put your attention on some things that maybe aren't to spectacular, like statistics or probability (as I said), while the drives are far to each other.
Racing
Today I would like to write about a topic I like a lot.
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But beingto be honest, to enjoy a race there must be a driver of your country on the grid or you(on the track) or if you are someone that really enjoy tos compareing statistics, laps and probability, so you shouldcan find thea way to enjoy athe race based on that m. Most of the time there are drivers that approache to each other but they never really fight on track, and that way is by enjoying to compare and puthe track. Another way to find enjoyment is by comparing drivers or putting your attention on some things that maybe aren't too spectacular, like statistics or probability (as I said), while the drivers are far toaway from each other.
Apologies if I changed the meaning here. I think this is better across a few sentences. I also don't know if there are specific terms that racing uses (like grid) that might be appropriate here but I didn't understand so sorry about that.
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Very cool topic! I'm not much into motorsports but my friends go crazy for it. Also, in the future, if you include a Spanish version of your journal entry, I can help get your English closer to the meaning you're trying to convey! Saludos!
Racing
Today I woul'd like to write about a topic I like a lot.
Probably, mMost of the people who will read this doesprobably won't know too much about races (ofing (with cars), or doeswon't really care about it, but it is quite an interesting topic, i. In races, overtakes aren't the only exciting thing,: there are's strategy, tyire wear, there could be disagreements between 2 drivers of the same team, crashes and a lot more.
"Does" ("doesn't") is the singular form of the irregular verb "to do" ("to not do"), so you would want to use "don't" instead. However, because there is also a lot of uncertainty here, and you said "...people who WILL read...", I've used the future tense "won't" (which is actually speculative in this context)
Personally, I prefer to use a comma on the second-to-last item in a list as well. But both ways are perfectly fine and it's mostly up to personal preference.
"Apples, bananas, and carrots."
"Apples, bananas and carrots."
But beingto be honest, to enjoy a race there must be a driver ofrom your country on the grid, or you must really enjoy to compareing statistics, laps and probability, so y. You should find thea way to enjoy a race on thatwhere most of the time there are drivers that approache to each other but they never really fight on track, and that way is by enjoying to compareing and put youraying attention ton some things that maybe aren't too spectacular, like statistics or probability (as I said), while the drivers are far tofrom each other.
There are only a few select verbs that feel right going before an infinitive verb form (to ________). "I like to eat waffles" or "I like eating waffles" sounds nice to me, but "I enjoy to eat waffles" sounds very wrong.
"On that" cannot be used as a conjunction to further describe something. Instead, I would use "where" (because we are describing other things (drivers) that are within the place where the race happens).
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Some bonus information: I often call racing with cars "motorsports". This can also mean racing with motorcycles, motorboats, or even aircraft. But generally speaking, most people will probably think of cars when you say "motorsports".
Anyway, keep up the good work!
Racing
Today I would like to write about a topic I like a lot.
Probably, mMost of the people who will read this doesn' probably don’t know too much about car races (of cars), or doesn'n’t really care about them, but it is quite an interesting topic, i. In races, overtakes aren't the only exciting thing,: there areis strategy, tyre wear, there could be disagreements between 2two drivers of the same team, crashes, and a lot more.
You can use “probably” at the beginning of a sentence, but it is more common to put it before the main verb
“Doesn’t” is only used for he/she singular form. “Don’t” is used for all other forms
Instead of using words parenthesis to change a noun, you can usually just change that noun directly: say “car races” not “races (of cars)”
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Probably, most of the people who will read this doesn't know too much about races (of cars), or doesn't really care about, but is quite an interesting topic, in races overtakes aren't the only exiting thing, there are strategy, tyre wear, could be disagreements between 2 drivers of the same team, crashes and a lot more.
You can use “probably” at the beginning of a sentence, but it is more common to put it before the main verb “Doesn’t” is only used for he/she singular form. “Don’t” is used for all other forms Instead of using words parenthesis to change a noun, you can usually just change that noun directly: say “car races” not “races (of cars)”
"Does" ("doesn't") is the singular form of the irregular verb "to do" ("to not do"), so you would want to use "don't" instead. However, because there is also a lot of uncertainty here, and you said "...people who WILL read...", I've used the future tense "won't" (which is actually speculative in this context) Personally, I prefer to use a comma on the second-to-last item in a list as well. But both ways are perfectly fine and it's mostly up to personal preference. "Apples, bananas, and carrots." "Apples, bananas and carrots."
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But being honest, to enjoy a race there must be a driver of your country on the grid or you really enjoy to compare statistics, laps and probability, so you should find the way to enjoy a race on that most of the time there are drivers that aproche to each other but they never really fight on track, and that way is by enjoying to compare and put your attention on some things that maybe aren't to spectacular, like statistics or probability (as I said), while the drives are far to each other. But But There are only a few select verbs that feel right going before an infinitive verb form (to ________). "I like to eat waffles" or "I like eating waffles" sounds nice to me, but "I enjoy to eat waffles" sounds very wrong. "On that" cannot be used as a conjunction to further describe something. Instead, I would use "where" (because we are describing other things (drivers) that are within the place where the race happens). But Apologies if I changed the meaning here. I think this is better across a few sentences. I also don't know if there are specific terms that racing uses (like grid) that might be appropriate here but I didn't understand so sorry about that. |
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