July 8, 2022
My dreamhouse is villa with ten rooms the kitchen should be a ice mascine in the fridge a ice ceam bar and a turn table. The living room is a big cinema with a big screen and popcorn. The bathroom a big tub with a mirror and a hand dryer the toilet . Four bedroom in diffrent colors the basement is a small fair and a room with two massage chair masseur and a tv to watch. The garden has a whirdpool with chairs and umbrella and a smootie machine. The house have the color white with twenty windows and a balcony .
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My dreamhouse is a villa with ten rooms. the kitchen should bhave an ice maschine in the fridge, an ice cream bar, and a turn table.
My dreamhouse is a villa with ten rooms. the kitchen should have an ice machine in the fridge, an ice cream bar, and a turn table.
Be careful with articles like "a" and "an". These go before nouns. Also be careful with spelling
The living room is a big cinematheater room with a big screen and popcorn.
The living room is a big theater room with a big screen and popcorn.
The bathroom has a big tub with a mirror and, a hand dryer the, and a toilet .
The bathroom has a big tub with a mirror, a hand dryer, and a toilet .
The verb "has" is very important. Again watch out for artcles like "the" and "a"
The house has Four bedrooms in different colors. the basement is a small fair andhas a room with two massage chair masseurs and a tv to watch.
The house has Four bedrooms in different colors. the basement has a room with two massage chairs and a tv to watch.
"Fair" does not make sense here.
The garden has a whirdpool with chairs, and umbrella, and a smoothie machine.
The garden has a pool with chairs, an umbrella, and a smoothie machine.
"Pool" or "hot tub" is probably what you meant here.
The house haveis the color white with twenty windows and a balcony .
The house is the color white with twenty windows and a balcony .
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Great job overall! Very nice detail. You have a great vocabulary.
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My Dreamhouse
My dreamhouse is villa with ten rooms the, a kitchen, there should be an ice maschine in the fridge, an ice cream bar, and a turn table.
My dreamhouse is villa with ten rooms, a kitchen, there should be an ice machine in the fridge, an ice cream bar, and a turn table.
The living room iswould have a big cinema with a big screen and popcorn.
The living room would have a big cinema with a big screen and popcorn.
The bathroom would have a big tub with a mirror and a hand dryer near the toilet .
The bathroom would have a big tub with a mirror and a hand dryer near the toilet.
Four bedroom in different colors t. The basement iswould be a small fair(?) and a room with two massage chair masseurs, and a tv to watch.
Four bedroom in different colors. The basement would be a small fair(?) and a room with two massage chairs, and a tv to watch.
I'm not sure what 'fair' was meant to be here.
The garden has would have a whirdlpool with chairs, and umbrella, and a smoothie machine.
The garden would have a whirlpool with chairs, an umbrella, and a smoothie machine.
The house have the colorwould be white with twenty windows and a balcony .
The house would be white with twenty windows and a balcony.
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My dreamhouse is villa with ten rooms the kitchen should be a ice mascine in the fridge a ice ceam bar and a turn table.
My dreamhouse is villa with ten rooms
My dreamhouse is a villa with ten rooms. the kitchen should Be careful with articles like "a" and "an". These go before nouns. Also be careful with spelling |
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The living room is a big cinema with a big screen and popcorn.
The living room
The living room is a big |
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The bathroom a big tub with a mirror and a hand dryer the toilet .
The bathroom would have a big tub with a mirror and a hand dryer near the toilet
The bathroom has a big tub with a mirror The verb "has" is very important. Again watch out for artcles like "the" and "a" |
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Four bedroom in diffrent colors the basement is a small fair and a room with two massage chair masseur and a tv to watch.
Four bedroom in different colors I'm not sure what 'fair' was meant to be here.
The house has Four bedrooms in different colors. the basement "Fair" does not make sense here. |
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The garden has a whirdpool with chairs and umbrella and a smootie machine.
The garden
The garden has a "Pool" or "hot tub" is probably what you meant here. |
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The house have the color white with twenty windows and a balcony .
The house
The house |
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