Sept. 25, 2020
Reviewing last semester
Today, I have got all of my grades last semester, so I want to review classes and give my simple impression. Last semester was really tough for me because all of the classes were changed online suddenly and I took too many classes.
One of the hardest classes is "Strength of materials". In that class, I had to take 6 exams in total and I got a not good grade even though I did well in the last exam. However, other engineering classes are pretty good and my most favorite was "Applied mathematics and informatics", which is the practice of using Octave, a programming language for scientific computing. Its contents of the lecture were useful for other classes.
Concerning general education, I took literature, sociology, psychology, etc. English and Chinese were both pleasant because these are not as complicated or frustrating as linear algebra or fluid mechanics.
Anyway, it seems that I can go to the aerospace course thanks to my grade, so I am very happy and I make up my mind to study harder next semester.
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Today, I have gotten all of my grades from last semester, so I want to review the classes and give my simple impressions. Today, I have gotten all of my grades from last semester, so I want to review the classes and give my simple impressions.
Last semester was really tough for me because all of the classes were changed to online suddenly, and I tookhad taken too many classesof them.
Last semester was really tough for me because all of the classes were changed to online suddenly, and I had taken too many of them.
the comma makes the two reasons more distinct and not related
One of the hardest classes iwas "Strength of mMaterials".
One of the hardest classes was "Strength of Materials".
In that class, I had to take 6 exams in total and I got a notdidn't get a good grade even though I did well in the last exam.
In that class, I had to take 6 exams in total and I didn't get a good grade even though I did well in the last exam.
or, "... I got a bad grade even though..."
However, other engineering classes awere pretty good and m. My most favorite was "Applied mathematics and informatics"," which is the practice of using Octave, a programming language for scientific computing.
However, other engineering classes were pretty good. My most favorite was "Applied mathematics and informatics," which is the practice of using Octave, a programming language for scientific computing.
Breaking into two sentence makes it more natural.
ItsThe contents of the lectures were useful for other classes.
The contents of the lectures were useful for other classes.
Anyway, it seems that I can go to the aerospace course thanks to my grades, so I am very happy and I. I have makde up my mind to study harder next semester.
Anyway, it seems that I can go to the aerospace course thanks to my grades, so I am very happy. I have made up my mind to study harder next semester.
Again, splitting the sentence makes it sound clearer.
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Congratulations on the good semester!
Sept. 26, 2020
Thank you!
Today, I have got all of my grades of last semester, so I want to review classes and give my simple impression. Today, I have got all of my grades of last semester, so I want to review classes and give my simple impression.
Last semester was really tough for me because all of the classes were suddenly changed to online suddenly and I took/had too many classes.
Last semester was really tough for me because all of the classes were suddenly changed to online and I took/had too many classes.
One of the hardest classes iwas "Strength of materials".
One of the hardest classes was "Strength of materials".
However, other engineering classes awere pretty good and my most favorite was "Applied mathematics and informatics", which is the practice of using Octave, a programming language for scientific computing.
However, other engineering classes were pretty good and my most favorite was "Applied mathematics and informatics", which is the practice of using Octave, a programming language for scientific computing.
ItsThe contents of theis lecture were useful for other classes.
The contents of this lecture were useful for other classes.
Concerning general education, I took literature, sociology, psychology, etc.
English and Chinese were both pleasant because these are not as complicated or frustrating as linear algebra or fluid mechanics.
Anyway, it seems that I can go to the aerospace course thanks to my grade, so I am very happy and I have makde up my mind to study harder next semester.
Anyway, it seems that I can go to the aerospace course thanks to my grade, so I am very happy and I have made up my mind to study harder next semester.
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Reviewing last semester |
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Today, I have got all of my grades last semester, so I want to review classes and give my simple impression. Today, I have got all of my grades of last semester, so I want to review classes and give my simple impression. Today, I have got all of my grades of last semester, so I want to review classes and give my simple impression. Today, I have gotten all of my grades from last semester, so I want to review the classes and give my simple impressions. Today, I have gotten all of my grades from last semester, so I want to review the classes and give my simple impressions. |
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Last semester was really tough for me because all of the classes were changed online suddenly and I took too many classes.
Last semester was really tough for me because all of the classes were suddenly changed to online
Last semester was really tough for me because all of the classes were changed to online suddenly, and I the comma makes the two reasons more distinct and not related |
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One of the hardest classes is "Strength of materials".
One of the hardest classes
One of the hardest classes |
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In that class, I had to take 6 exams in total and I got a not good grade even though I did well in the last exam.
In that class, I had to take 6 exams in total and I or, "... I got a bad grade even though..." |
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However, other engineering classes are pretty good and my most favorite was "Applied mathematics and informatics", which is the practice of using Octave, a programming language for scientific computing.
However, other engineering classes
However, other engineering classes Breaking into two sentence makes it more natural. |
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Its contents of the lecture were useful for other classes.
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Concerning general education, I took literature, sociology, psychology, etc. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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English and Chinese were both pleasant because these are not as complicated or frustrating as linear algebra or fluid mechanics. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anyway, it seems that I can go to the aerospace course thanks to my grade, so I am very happy and I make up my mind to study harder next semester.
Anyway, it seems that I can go to the aerospace course thanks to my grade, so I am very happy and I have ma
Anyway, it seems that I can go to the aerospace course thanks to my grades, so I am very happy Again, splitting the sentence makes it sound clearer. |
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