May 4, 2026
No screens in Swedish schools
I read bellow news.
https://newsinlevels.com/products/no-screens-in-swedish-schools-level-1/
I agree to this attempt.
I feel to not good for growth of young children.
Even adults were catched the charm, and They became smartphone addiction. I think that young children give more big impact.
It is considered that children who have trouble concentrating are increace in Japan.
Of course PC and smart phone are very wonderful tool, but We have to attension to use its.
以下のニュースを読みました。
https://newsinlevels.com/products/no-screens-in-swedish-schools-level-1/
私はこの試みに賛成します。
小さい子供の発育にPCやスマホは良くないと感じます。
大人でもその魅力に取りつかれ、スマホ中毒と呼ばれるような状態になります。子供ならもっと大きな影響を受けてしまうでしょう。
日本でも、集中できない子供が増えていると言われています。
もちろん、PCやスマホはとても素晴らしいツールです。しかし、扱いには注意が必要だと考えます。
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No screens in Swedish schools
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I read the news below.
I agree towith this attempt.
I agree with this attempt.
I feel toscreens* are not good for growth of young children.
I feel screens* are not good for growth of young children.
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*OR ... they have become smartphone addicts.
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I think the impact on young children is stronger.
It is considerrecognized that children who have trouble concentrating are increacesing in Japan.
It is recognized that children who have trouble concentrating are increasing in Japan.
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Of course PCs and smartphones are very wonderful tools, but we have to pay attention to how we use them.
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Great article! Thanks.
May 7, 2026
Thank you for checking and advices!
I read the news bellow news.
I read the news bellow.
I agree towith this attempt.
I agree with this attempt.
「I support this initiative.」とか「I agree with this initiative」でも大丈夫です
I feel toit's not good for the growth of young children.
I feel it's not good for the growth of young children.
「The development of young children」と言ってもオーケーです
Even adults were catched the charmptivated, and Tthey became smartphone addictionaddicted to smartphones.
Even adults were captivated, and they became addicted to smartphones.
I think that young children givare more big impacted.
I think that young children are more impacted.
It is considered thatThe number of children who have trouble concentrating areis increacesing in Japan.
The number of children who have trouble concentrating is increasing in Japan.
Of course PCs and smart phones are very wonderful tools, but Wwe have to attension to use itsuse them with caution.
Of course PCs and smart phones are very wonderful tools, but we have to use them with caution.
Feedback
Your writing is very nice! I agree with this initiative. Smartphones are addictive, and children are easily influenced. I believe we must use them carefully.
May 7, 2026
Thank you for checking and advices!
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I read bellow news.
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I read the news bellow |
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https://newsinlevels.com/products/no-screens-in-swedish-schools-level-1/ |
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I agree to this attempt.
I agree
I agree 「I support this initiative.」とか「I agree with this initiative」でも大丈夫です |
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I feel to not good for growth of young children.
I feel * This could be more clear. Do you mean 'screens' are not good?
I feel 「The development of young children」と言ってもオーケーです |
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Even adults were catched the charm, and They became smartphone addiction.
Even adults *OR ... they have become smartphone addicts.
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I think that young children give more big impact.
I think th
I think that young children |
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It is considered that children who have trouble concentrating are increace in Japan.
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Of course PC and smart phone are very wonderful tool, but We have to attension to use its.
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Of course PCs and smart phones are very wonderful tools, but |
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