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Try to create shorter sentences and use full stops. Languages are always capitalized.

This is my first time ion this site I heard about it from my friend I know my english is very weak but I need to make it stronger fast. My friend was the one to tell me about it. I know my english isn’t the strongest. I would like to improve my English quicker. This is my first time on this site. My friend was the one to tell me about it. I know my english isn’t the strongest. I would like to improve my English quicker.

Made corrections to improve sentence structure and to improve the overall message.

This is my first time ion this site, I heard about it from my friend I know my eEnglish is very weak but I need to make it stronger fast This is my first time on this site, I heard about it from my friend I know my English is very weak but I need to make it stronger fast

You can also say: on this site that I heard about from my friend

This is my first time ion this site. I heard about it from mya friend . I know my eEnglish is veryskills are weak , but I need to make it strongwant to get better faster. This is my first time on this site. I heard about it from a friend. I know my English skills are weak, but I want to get better faster.