Dec. 10, 2020
Discipline
Early this year when I start the new job.
I feel completely loss. (Maybe even now I still loss)
The job isn’t busy at all.
In fact is too “not busy”.
I got so many free time.
But I just don’t know how to use the extra free time properly.
Someday I will watch Netflix the whole day.
Someday I will read a book and do nothing.
Someday I may keep on exercise.
From now on I will start write down a list of “things to do” in my calendar.
Just one week ahead.
I want my future life become more discipline.
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Earlyier this year when I start theed my new job.
Earlier this year when I started my new job.
I feelt completely losst.
I felt completely lost.
(Maybe even now I still losst)
(Maybe even now I still lost)
In fact, it's too “not busy”. In fact, it's too “not busy”.
I gothave so manyuch free time.
I have so much free time.
Somedays I will watch Netflix the whole day. Somedays I will watch Netflix the whole day.
Somedays I will read a book and do nothing. Somedays I will read a book and do nothing.
Somedays I maytry to keep on exerciseing.
Somedays I try to keep exercising.
From now on I will start writeing down a list of “things to do” in my calendar.
From now on I will start writing down a list of “things to do” in my calendar.
I want my future life to become more disciplined. I want my future life to become more disciplined.
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Great job overall, you clearly delivered the message. Minor spelling and grammar errors, but you are improving! I hope things become better for you soon. Good luck!
Dec. 11, 2020
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I feel completely losst.
I feel completely lost.
(Maybe even now, I am still losst)
(Maybe even now, I am still lost)
In fact, it is too “not busy”. In fact, it is too “not busy”.
I gothave so manyuch free time.
I have so much free time.
Some days I will watch Netflix for the whole day. Some days I will watch Netflix for the whole day.
Some days I will read a book and do nothing. Some days I will read a book and do nothing.
Some days I may keep on exerciseing.
Some days I may keep on exercising.
From now on I will start writeing down a list of “things to do” in my calendar.
From now on I will start writing down a list of “things to do” in my calendar.
I want my future life become more disciplined. I want my future life become more disciplined.
Discipline
Earlyier this year, when I start theed my new job.,
Earlier this year, when I started my new job,
I feelt completely losst.
I felt completely lost.
(Maybe even nowIt could even be said that to this day, I still feel losst)
(It could even be said that to this day, I still feel lost)
The job isn’t busy at all.
In fact, it's too “not busy”. In fact, it's too “not busy”.
I've got so manyuch free time.
I've got so much free time.
But I just don’t know how to use the extra free time properly.
SOn some days, I will watch Netflix the whole dayall day long.
On some days, I watch Netflix all day long.
SOn some days, I will read a book and do nothing.
On some days, I read a book and do nothing.
SOn some days, I may keep onight exercise.
On some days, I might exercise.
From now on I will start write downmaking a list of “things to do”"TODO"s in my calendar.,
From now on I will start making a list of "TODO"s in my calendar,
or "a list of things to do" is fine too
Jjust onfor the the week ahead.
just for the the week ahead.
I want my future life become more disciplined. I want my future life become more disciplined.
Feedback
Your sentences were very clear and legible overall! However, I did notice that a lot of your sentences are sentence fragments (the sentences whose periods I changed to commas). Perhaps work on that for next time? Keep up the good work!
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Someday I will watch Netflix the whole day.
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Someday I will read a book and do nothing.
Somedays I will read a book and do nothing. Somedays I will read a book and do nothing. Some days I will read a book and do nothing. Some days I will read a book and do nothing. |
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Someday I may keep on exercise.
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From now on I will start write down a list of “things to do” in my calendar.
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Just one week ahead.
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I want my future life become more discipline. I want my future life become more disciplined. I want my future life become more disciplined. I want my future life to become more disciplined. I want my future life to become more disciplined. I want my future life become more disciplined. I want my future life become more disciplined. |
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