Oct. 17, 2021
October 17th, 2021
As expected, it was cool today. The temperature is about 8ﾟC lower than yesterday. The first snow of the year fallen in Hokkaido.
予報通り、今日は涼しくなりました。昨日より8℃くらい低くなりました。北海道では初雪が降りました。
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As expected, it was coold today.
As expected, it was cold today.
I am not english native speaker,but here i believe cold is better, as it has a bit unpleasant meaning
The first snow of the year has fallen in Hokkaido. The first snow of the year has fallen in Hokkaido.
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北海道に 行ったことがない。
多い緑 と温泉で湯名ですから 来年に 行くつもりです。
お勧めあるんですか？
Oct. 18, 2021
北海道はどこに行っても自然が綺麗でいいと思いますよ。
添削ありがとうございます。
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October 17th, 2021 |
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As expected, it was cool today.
As expected, it was co I am not english native speaker,but here i believe cold is better, as it has a bit unpleasant meaning |
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The temperature is about 8ﾟC lower than yesterday. |
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The first snow of the year fallen in Hokkaido. The first snow of the year has fallen in Hokkaido. The first snow of the year has fallen in Hokkaido. |
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