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Day Twelve: Jordan Trip Part Five

The next day my band went to the paid beach because it is cleaner, less scary, and had a lot of chairs, umbrellas, some entertainment from animators, and bars (with alcohol-free beers).

We were resting, and talking, and the waiter brought us some smoothies.
"We didn't order those". - we were telling him.
"Mo worries, it was paid by the man over there." - He points at yesterday's staff guy I asked for his name.
Of course, my band started making jokes, but I felt so bad about what I'd done. I didn't realize my friendly gesture could mean something else in this country.

The bus took us from our hotel to this beach in the morning, but we took a taxi to return. Maybe we weren't lucky, but we found only one taxi driver who was buying instant noodles. His five-sit car (including the driver seat) accommodated six of us. We put P, the only boy in our company, in the front seat, and five of us sat in the back.

Right after the ride started, the driver began to make some pervert things. He didn't know English well, so mostly he showed what he meant by gestures. When he found out that we were from Russia he called us all Natasha. As far as I understand it is the most common Russian name for foreigners and has an image of a standard Russian woman - blond, slim, pretty, maybe sometimes mercantile, and easily accessible.

One of us had really big lips, and he focused on them. He inflated his lips and showed by gesture that they were big. But before that, he decided to finish his instant noodles while driving.

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Day Twelve: Jordan Trip Part Five

Of course, my band started making jokes, but I felt so bad about what I'd done.

I didn't realize my friendly gesture could mean something else in this country.

He didn't know English well, so mostly he showed what he meant by gestures.

One of us had really big lips, and he focused on them.

He inflated his lips and showed by gesture that they were big.

But before that, he decided to finish his instant noodles while driving.

- we were telling him.


- we were telling him.

- we were telling him. - we were telling him.

We told him

Day Twelve: Jordan Trip Part Five


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The next day my band went to the paid beach because it is cleaner, less scary, and had a lot of chairs, umbrellas, some entertainment from animators, and bars (with alcohol-free beers).


The next day, my band went to the paid beach, because it is cleaner, less scary, and had a lot of chairs, umbrellas, some entertainment from animators, and bars (with alcohol-free beers). The next day, my band went to the paid beach, because it is cleaner, less scary, and had a lot of chairs, umbrellas, some entertainment from animators, and bars (with alcohol-free beers).

I'm not sure what "entertainment from animators" means

The next day my band went to the paid beach because it is cleaner, less scary, and had a lot of chairs, umbrellas, some entertainment from animators, and bars (with alcohol-free beers). The next day my band went to the paid beach because it is cleaner, less scary, and had a lot of chairs, umbrellas, some entertainment from animators, and bars (with alcohol-free beers).

The next day my band went to the beach that requires a fee for entry because it is cleaner and less scary; in addition it had a lot of chairs, umbrellas, entertainment from animators, and bars that even had alcohol free beers.

We were resting, and talking, and the waiter brought us some smoothies.


We were resting, and talktaking a break and chatting, and the waiter brought us some smoothies. We were taking a break and chatting, and the waiter brought us some smoothies.

"We didn't order those".


"We told him that we didn't order those". We told him that we didn't order those.

"Mo worries, it was paid by the man over there."


"MNo worries, it was paid by the man over there paid for it." "No worries, the man over there paid for it."

"Mo worries, it was paid by the man over there." "Mo worries, it was paid by the man over there."

"No worries, it was paid for by the main over there."

- He points at yesterday's staff guy I asked for his name.


- He pointsed at yesterday's staff guy Ian employee who I recognized from askeding for his name yesterday. He pointed at an employee who I recognized from asking for his name yesterday.

- He points at yesterday's staff guy I asked for his name. - He points at yesterday's staff guy I asked for his name.

He pointed at one of the staff from yesterday, so I asked for his name.

Of course, my band started making jokes, but I felt so bad about what I'd done.


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Of course, my band started making jokes, but I felt so bad about what I'd done. Of course, my band started making jokes, but I felt so bad about what I'd done.

Of course, my band started making jokes but I felt so bad about what I said.

I didn't realize my friendly gesture could mean something else in this country.


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The bus took us from our hotel to this beach in the morning, but we took a taxi to return.


The bus took us from our hotel to this beach in the morning, but we took a taxi to return to the hotel. The bus took us from our hotel to this beach in the morning, but we took a taxi to return to the hotel.

Maybe we weren't lucky, but we found only one taxi driver who was buying instant noodles.


Maybe we weren't lucky, but we found only one taxi driver, who was buying instant noodles at the moment. Maybe we weren't lucky, but we found only one taxi driver, who was buying instant noodles at the moment.

Maybe we weren't lucky, but we found only one taxi driver who was buying instant noodles. Maybe we weren't lucky, but we found only one taxi driver who was buying instant noodles.

Unfortunately, we only found one taxi driver. He was buying some instant noodles.

His five-sit car (including the driver seat) accommodated six of us.


His five-sieat car (including the driver seat) accommodated the six of us. His five-seat car (including the driver seat) accommodated the six of us.

His five-sit car (including the driver seat) accommodated six of us. His five-sit car (including the driver seat) accommodated six of us.

His five-seater (including the driver seat) accommodated six of us.

We put P, the only boy in our company, in the front seat, and five of us sat in the back.


We put P, the only boguy in our companygroup, in the front seat, and five of us sat in the back. We put P, the only guy in our group, in the front seat, and five of us sat in the back.

Boy is used for children

Right after the ride started, the driver began to make some pervert things.


Right after the ride startedvegan, the driver began to makedo some perverted things. Right after the ride vegan, the driver began to do some perverted things.

He didn't know English well, so mostly he showed what he meant by gestures.


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When he found out that we were from Russia he called us all Natasha.


When he found out that we were from Russia, he called us all "Natasha." When he found out that we were from Russia, he called us all "Natasha."

As far as I understand it is the most common Russian name for foreigners and has an image of a standard Russian woman - blond, slim, pretty, maybe sometimes mercantile, and easily accessible.


As far as I understandknow, it is the most common Russian name for foreigners and has an image of athe standard Russian woman - blond, slim, pretty, maybe sometimes mercantile, and easily accessible. As far as I know, it is the most common Russian name for foreigners and has an image of the standard Russian woman - blond, slim, pretty, maybe sometimes mercantile, and easily accessible.

One of us had really big lips, and he focused on them.


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He inflated his lips and showed by gesture that they were big.


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But before that, he decided to finish his instant noodles while driving.


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